Chapters 1-4: https://e-hentai.org/g/3120040/55bdebdb04/

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You know, this is exactly why I come here, someone who has studied the story, and the artwork, asks a single question like what happens if t these two fall in love and builds an entire world around it with the quality of a non-canon project. Brilliantly executed. No notes.

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I can't believe the leaf pig sunk their ship over a literal bullshit excuse kek. This alone justifies MC going full MAGA and f*ck the life of these subnormal leafies as revenge (in LH minecraft ofc). Where are these @Taki8hiro strips when you need them?

Now seriously, this intent of bringing events from the show makes the whole thing feel off. Author should have just kept it serious across the whole act.
Also... Luna, darling... You are the least person to talk about "delusion relationships" as you called it, to say the least...

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Le drama fo yo mama

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That was it?

So dumb.

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Pg.42:
Luna: "Bro... I didn't meant it like that" (tm)

Like... What? You totally meant it that way! Now stand on your words, you passive/aggresive lesbo b*tch!

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Most peak, absolute peak. I bow to the masterclass of this. The artstyle is on point, the writing was handled with care, I love the attempt to tie in to the show events. absolutely giddy I came across this. Definitely up there as one of my fav fanfics.

My compliments to the chef Underrated Hero, bro cooked amd I haven't ate that well in awhile!

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@Raijinzrael: And given Luna's own relationship with Sam, you'd think she would be written to be more understanding of non-socially-acceptable relationships.

Quite a curve ball how this chapter showed how Lola has had feelings for Lincoln too.

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@Quflow Now you mention it... This comic author wrote Luna's lesbian relationship as if it has been always a valid relationship option in this story world, when it isn't. In fact her ship was hidden the whole first season, and part of the second. They even had a whole chapter about family's "support" to Luna's lesbian ship. So seeing her here act like a righteous jerk given her own history, makes her appear just as an hypocrite passive/aggressive lesbian bitch.

I remark this because this author brought a shitty canon event (the leafies and their mapple syrup rump bs) on purpose to sink Lincoln/Lynn ship. So conveniently forgets one thing, but brings other (an stupid one I would say) to patch his laziness to invent a proper event which doesn't suck for the purpose of the argument.

Whatever... I'm already used to the fact 99% artists love to write Luna this way. That seems to be just how it is.

PD: The Lola having "feelings" for Lincoln thing is the reason why in the past society had strict red lines on topic, and everything outside it was a banned taboo. I can see the argument coming from the very fact than Lincoln brought to his defense argument Luna's homosexual relationship with Sam, and the fact they are now married (in story) and everyone is supporting them. He basically is asking the same support as his sister Luna received, implicit marking he in the depth knows his sister homo relationship with Sam isn't normal as well, despite how it is being seen socially there (and legally, in story world)... But if his parents and family, for some unreal reason, pass as that as valid, then Lincoln himself has to pass Lola's feelings for him as valid and accept he broke her. And if they accept that as valid, where the f*ck you will stop and draw the line? What you will do, for example, if a single digit young Lily develops her hots for a married Lincoln and want to steal him to his wife? What if Lana "gets in love" with a f*cking horse? In the end, if we get strict, none of these really serves other purpose (societal nor biological) than pure flesh satisfaction and fulfilling an elaborated delusional obsession.

I will leave it there... Is a fucking can of worms to discuss here and I like Lola's e-hentai porn anyways :-P.

PD2: Kek, I fucked with the names. Fixed.

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Well, curiosity killed the cat... this is just not for me.

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@Raijinzrael Jeez, you are vile, dude

> And if they accept that as valid, where the f*ck you will stop and draw the line?

Consent between adults, it is not a f*cking rocket science.

> In the end, if we get strict, none of these really serves other purpose (societal nor biological) than pure flesh satisfaction and fulfilling an elaborated delusional obsession.

Keep projecting. There a plenty of straight non-incest adult relationships that don't feel anything but sexual gratification and the are gay people that raised families and contributed more to society than some gooner on e-hentain. No family is obligated to conform for some creepy abstract utilitarian "breed for human future" obsession, adult humans should have right to mind their own f*cking business in privacy of their homes.

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So basically they got their personal and loyal Alfred in the UK, who will help them to straight their mess up while making no questions. I guess I may say "well played" (tm) as I didn't expect the artist bringing and using a character coming from the movie like this. Also, artist made Alfred imply this had already happened "in the family" before (in this story only ofc)?

Too convenient, but the movie seems to back Alfred's loyalty to his boss, so it may be fine I guess.
Notes aside (and without movie's backed plot armor), I would say irl UK would be a place worse than the USA to move in their situation. Highly monitored and a sec 5Eyes member. Such are the niceties to have "platinum" loyal contacts backing you, and I wonder where they would have moved if the movie had not happened.

@Langeus Luxor
From here, and only talking about your comment clearly about irl.

First, mentally ill people, just like children, can't consent. Period.
Second, any and every unrelated "merit" you would have doesn't invalidate the first point. "Too big to fall" (tm) doesn't apply here.
Third, if you invalidate the first 2 points, then you are just proving my point at my last message. Thank you.

>Jeez, you are vile, dude
Coming from someone with your kind of though patterns, to me is like a compliment. Thank you.

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Page 59: Hmm... It will result, that the current Loud bloodline, is a direct descendant from that incestuos relationship between their ancestors. Because there was a time, when keep the bloodline pure was so important, that these kind of relationships were usual, accepted and applauded by people.
Let's see what happens when the family goes to the castle looking for Lincoln and Lynn, and the butler tells them that history.
This is a mere speculation of mine. But it could be and "interesting"plot twist.

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