Chapter 3 for your enjoyment :)

Amazing work! (I can't wait for 7, it's my favorite)

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Great pace!

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Good work, looking forward to more!

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Speed to strike, and strength to make the strikes count. No defenses, because they don’t expect anything to hit them. No technique, because they’re so strong they can afford to be sloppy.No wisdom, because they don’t care to consider what traps the enemy might lay for them. A good enough rogue could take these two apart.

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"The ears of a deadly rabbit that wiped out an entire squad of knights!"
Monty Python? In MY hentai? It's more likely than you think.

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hoooly shit FINALLY more alfre-tori translations, ever since tystopia got translated I was praying for more! fantastic work, can't wait to see the rest!

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While I understand "pyon" is a pretty nonsensical Japanese onomatopoeia that doesn't have much of an equivalent in English, I'm not sure about the choice to translate as 'byoing' specifically because it reminds me of 'boin/boing', which is typically used differently than here. I know some people hate leaving things untranslated, but I would have liked it if it was just left as pyon and then have a TL-note at the end or in the gallery comment.
That and the emphasis on certain words through the typesetting bothers me, since it doesn't exist in the raw.
It's just a personal thing at the end of the day, though.

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@HeavHo - Thanks for the feedback! I'm still refining my trans/typesetting process with these early chapters, so bear with me a bit.

Translation note to address your comments:

- The "Bunny Curse" forces the Vorpal Dolls to add 'pyon!' to the ends of their sentences.
'Pyon' is Japanese onomatopeoia for bouncing/hopping like a rabbit, and it's often used as a cutesy affectation to speech.
Normally, it's best left untranslated, but here I thought it was important to make clear that the 'Bunny Curse' forces you to make a 'hopping' sound like a rabbit, and not just a nonsense syllable. So I rendered it as 'byoing!'
Overall, I try to avoid relying on translation notes. Especially in ecchi stuff. They break the flow. But there are certain things I will leave notes for in the future.

- Re: the bold/emphasized words. This is more a comics typesetting convention - it makes the lines easier to read quickly. But I agree that I overdid it in places. I'm working on it!

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Piyon can be interpreted as a bouncing/spring sound just fine too
There was really no need to change it

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