@ramza022 the font I use for "moaning and screaming" is called PalookaBB. The standard font I use for conversation is called Odaballoon. I wanted something that looked like Tom Orzechowski's letters. This is just my preference.
@matxeon I'm certain you noticed that my translation of Chapter 9 is available in the complete version, starting on P. 227 there.
I'm sure there are some of the usual fuckups in here, but frankly I was just glad to be finished with it after having focused on it so much this last couple of weeks. No doubt I will cringe at whatever typos I made that I missed later on...
NOTE ON THE STORY As others have pointed out, this is a typical Hoshino Ryuichi open-ended finish, I'll refrain from issuing any criticisms of the overall story or the art. The idea of the sexually repressed housewife who discovers her true sexuality is an old one, but still one of my favorite tropes, and I can speak from this personally. I also like the idea of Kyoko not knowing if Akemi and/or Mrs. Ichinose have seen the explicit videos, if Yotsuya did, he sure kept his mouth shut about it!
I will say two things, however, first that Itsukaichi is an idiot, and he didn't need to use blackmail to force women, particularly Kyoko, to do his bidding. Another typical trope, this one for hentai, but not one I'm particularly fond of.
Second, I'm still not happy about the damn pixelization, it ruins a lot for me. Is that added later, or does the artist him/herself do it? It's 2025, we know what a fucking pussy looks like already! Time to lose this antiquated law!
Just my opinion, in both cases...
NOTE ON THE TRANSLATION I had some serious issues with the translation on p.76, where Mrs. Ichinose and Akemi confront Itsukaichi and force him to stop, there was a mention of something hidden in a prep school locker, and that files were deleted. Was it a person hiding in the locker, or was is computer files somehow? If so, what exactly were they? There was nothing in the prior stories that I could see to give me a reference.
There was no indication of who was talking, but since the word "you" was used, I have to assume it was Akemi, talking to Itsukaichi. If this is true, it didn't make sense for Akemi to delete the files, as they could be used as evidence against Itsukaichi if they wanted to go to the police. Also, Itsukaichi's family would also have likely fought t have the files deleted. I did my best to make sense of all of it, but if someone wishes to clarify, please feel free.
FOR THE MODERATORS I have the complete run of the series ready for upload, but from prior experience, I don't know if this would be allowed. Please advise!
5 years for this? OK, there is some comeuppance, but not nearly enough... would a proper punishment of Itsukaichi or a proper call-out ok Kyoko turn off the author and the NTR fans that much?...
The author is pretty funny. If I understood correctly, he’s afraid of following a similar plot, but at the same time, he wants to continue the NTR with the FMC taking the initiative this time. It’s basically the same thing as before, just from a different perspective.
This open ending is great—after 11 chapters of Kyoko gradually accepting her perversion, an ending where her ordeal finally comes to an end is perfect. No need to drag it out any further, in my opinion.
Nah, I just can't... I love Hoshino's art but the plots are so lame that I just can't. The characters would have to be mentally retarded and/or have crippling emotional issues to allow themselves to be treated like that. The only reason that turns me off is that Hoshino is trying to write a "serious" story. I'm not a fan of NTR but I can enjoy good stories or funny ones if the art is good. But this, I don't even need the translation, as the plot is just bad. At least the art is top notch.