Since no one else would do it, I'll do it myself.

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01286238.html

What's with the strange editing? There are words written over other words. And I'm not talking about the left over japanese.

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The editing is a bit weird but at least someone translated it. 90% of doujins never get a translation. So thank you.

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What the actual fuck was that editing? Half of the onomatopoeia is literal, often times confusing the sound extending っ for the normal つ, there is stray Japanese text in a lot of bubbles and really weird spacing were certain words seemed cut off and then pasted in where they didn't belong.

Overall it was mostly readable, but rough to say the least.

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Man I want a slime girl gf too

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