It's good art, but I can't help but feel something is off balance each chapter, like the focus just doesn't line up. It goes from rape to mind control so suddenly, without any time to connect them.

Base +7, Miyepi +1, SpiritOrg -8

"she once asked him out on a shopping date to help him dress better, but was refused" writing it at the begging of the chapter as a character description is just a wasted good opportunity. I would've loved to see a small segment where he accepted and tried new clothing, that would've made the control so much more satisfying since she is a loyal brainwashed slave. She is doing what the spell altered her to do plain sex is getting boring after a while; the beauty of mind control is to be in control, not just have sex.

If only the author had more pages like 47...

Base +5, SpiritOrg -8, tsathoggua +6, wretchwound +3

the writing is pretty bad and he just instantly wins at the start, yeah...

Base +6, HinaMahoko +6, SpiritOrg -8

It tries to tick too much checkbox at once, and thus failed at all of them. It is a sort of isekai, but it doesn't matter to the story: if he was just an evil mage in our world nothing would change because only him remember his past life,making the revenge meaningless. We don't know enough about the personality of the girl to make their corruption interesting (and said corruption, is just I raped you thus you are now my devoted slave, which is boring).

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Base +6, the dru one +7, killthepie +12, SyrupBoop +6, HinaMahoko +6, Nausea +7, SpiritOrg -8

Let me guess, Shizuku is going to know him.

Base +7, SpiritOrg -8

The revenge also fails because they killed him due to being an enemy combatant that was actively trying to harm and enslave them. Not to mention that the lack of them having any knowledge of the past live makes it entirely empty.
Maybe it's a setup to the hero party getting their memories back at the end and punishing the dude, as a rug pull, so it can't even be satisfying, as the only target audience of such stories are mind control enjoyers, those that would enjoy the domination loss would already have been not reading due to the already existing chapters

Base +8

In order:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3169536/c46632a802/
https://e-hentai.org/g/3243063/9dfa8587a0/
https://e-hentai.org/g/3245453/d6870d9e9d/
https://e-hentai.org/g/3323619/59e7f06b37/

Base +6