Peak ntr, stay crying cucks

画风好好看

Base +3

Translation seems to be more on the rough side. Story is better than the usual ntr, at least the plot is a bit unique. The only missing thing was the cuck masturbating. It would be funny if in a continuation the cuck shows off and have a bigger dick than the bully and ends up stealing the bully girl but still ends up having to financially help his sister/mom.

Base +2, GypsyBastard -6, reziak -6

This is a amalgamation of different ntr stories but, it it is most similar to the person who made the musa stories. He also had a story about step siblings and ntr but, this adds a few different touches to make it just different enough to not be 1 to 1.

Base +8, GypsyBastard +6, Orengestar -8, nanaya666 -6

Ok, this NTR is just too over the top. The kidnapping conspiracy, and fucking the mom is just too absurd. Should have just kept it a simple story of a bull sweeping a girl off her feet.

Base +6, GypsyBastard -6, Yukipo~ +6, rikudosennin -6, LegacyShadow +7

that ending with the mother is bonkers. legit one of the best netorare setup i've ever seen all the subtle implications and digs. they cross out the son's name showing it's not his house, the mother is completely dolled up, but she tells him she forgot he was coming even though he told her. she just "forgets" her son who she hasn't seen for a 1+ is coming home and then casually tells him she forgot like it doesn't matter. the mother also never hugged him or even got close to him even though it's her son and she hadn't seen him for a year+. she serves tea, but she doesn't serve tea to her son only to gouki not offering her son who traveled far anything to eat or drink. she casually tells him they changed his room to storage and she has this kinda "i don't give a care" tone where she says she "guesses it's good enough for him to sleep" like she doesn't care. at the end the sister tells the brother to come back after showing him that crazy sex while saying she doesn't need him and the way she words it in japanese has this implication she's saying it's not his house anymore. the mother "agrees" but it's like she's agreeing it's not his house. then gouki tells him next time he comes him show him something awesome.

gouki telling him next time he visits he'll be shown more shows this was planned. the story made it seem like the mother "forgot" but they actually planned it and ambushed him to show everything and humiliate him. the mother went along with it and just pretended she forgot to rub it in his face and show how she doesn't care. also, remember they crossed out his name at the entrance while they mock him saying it's "his home" and the mother decided to come out dressed like that to purposely show him.

Base +9, GypsyBastard +6, Orengestar -8, Chapell +6, FaithCum +3

@notdapooper
The mother never liked him to begin with so that's natural.

Base +8, reziak +6, your_name +6, Chapell +6

@vjbeal96 after hina insulted gouki at the entrance ritsuko told him to get even and then the mother gives away his tuition as an "investment". the investment scam was gouki getting even because what hina said to him. the question is though why would the mother invest the son's college tuition when he's going to go soon if she really loves him? it's like she wanted to fuck him over too. the mothers outfit/jewelry at the end is more expensive than when she was with her 2nd husband so i imagine gouki bought it for her. now the mother can live easier with gouki giving her money so she decided to go along with trying to humiliate and destroy her son.

also, also his original wish was to maintain their "home" preserving it, but at the end he loses everything. his entire family and home getting replaced at every level possible. that makes them mocking him at it's "his home" at the end hit even harder

Base +9, GypsyBastard +6, reziak +6, Chapell +6

@ kakajah

Looks like MTL.

Page 33: "Plus, she went and set her hair on fire afterward..." when it's the guy got his hair burned. Machine translation usually struggles with this (getting who is saying what, and to whom) esp with Japanese text.

Base +8

Honestly, couldn't happen in the states. Some dudes crash out when their girls talking to other dudes at work or ordering food. Gouki woulda caught a six pack to the chest real fast if he tried this.

Base +5, rikudosennin -6