没有多少肉，还看不懂

Base +6

You're onto something needs more CG variations and editing the story isn't that bad.

Base +22, Malkovik -6, Roludo +6

Is this AI based on Ratatatatat74's style?

This feels odd and unnatural.

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What a pathetic fan crap

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This is a AI made translation of a fanfic, so there are 180 pages worth of content written for this. Im slowly learning the software, but thank you for reading. I am a writer, not a artist so this is all new to me

Base +2, Roludo +6

I agree, I think you're onto something here, but the father's monologue to the daughter seems unnecessary. It takes around 10 pages for him to say something that could have been summarized in one text exchange. Also there seems to be no reason for him to ask for Alex to be handed the phone.

Also if you're not sure what kind of currency you want to use, you could just put something like: "I'll pay you to do this" or "I'll make it worth your while".

I'm not sure why you had him bring the ex inside his house instead of just calling an ambulance, also not sure why he'd consider taking her back.

In the final text exchange the exchange feels unnatural, also it might be worth editing the bubbles to better fit the text you want to put in them.

Base +7, lcresp +6

> Steals art
> It's just a fanfic!

Suck some dick dude and go to hell.

Base +7, Malkovik +6, lcresp -6, hitman1000 -6, newguy2012a +12, Roludo -6, ROBERTO2109 +6

thats how u deal with cheating and ntr

Base +8, Roludo +6

Thank you for the feedback Hunter. I am new to the software and will take your feedback into account going forward. Yuna never leaves the house. This is all part of Kim's plan. This is what I had in mind if you pissed off someone with time, motive and resources.

Base +2

women don't use human language like men do so explaining all sorts of details using logic is useless to them. you can't actually have an epic "all part of the master plan" with women using facts and logic cause they don't give a shit. should keep it shorter on the dads dialogue and let the women freak out more blaming him. have the women use a kind of inverted logic: the things they do are actually the fault of the dad and the dad is wrong for not allowing himself to be used and treated like garbage. also change the text color for the dad, mother, and alex so it's easier to read.

Base +9, mebb123 -6, Malkovik +6

I have 3 more pages finished up on my Twitter, Ive changed the text on the first two as a Test and I really like it. Ill probably go without the outline from now on

https://x.com/ntrhero223877

Base +2

Anti-NTR rocks dude! Looking forward to more from you in the future.

Base +6, rikudosennin -6, newguy2012a -12, Roludo +6

做插图或者即堕很好，其他基本都很拉胯

Base +7