Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3258615/35d0cb81dc/
Decided to translate this since I wanted a better version than the MTL one.
I'm not a professional translator so there may be some mistakes here and there.
Also didn't translate background noises or title, cause I ain't redrawing that lol.

Extra info: In the Japanese version the MC describes themselves with 'Ore (male)', but this gradually changes to 'Watakushi (female)'.
Both are translated as 'I' so in order to try to make this difference clear I decided to use the royal 'We'.
I also tried to make them speak a bit more formally/royally.
I couldn't really think of a better way than this and hope it isn't too jarring.

you couldn't take 5 minutes to google "good manga fonts"?

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@skibidibenki
I don't really see the problem, also any recommendations then?

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@skibidibenki
You don't have to be aggressive about it. Just give your tips and recommendation, he will improve. Being harsh and aggressive and uou'll just stop him to share his translation.

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Maybe he mean the character should be aligned vertically, like
columns, instead of rows

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@skibidibenki
Wow really? Is that your complaint...?

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The fonts are fine and readable

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Anime Ace is always a good choice. CCZoinks as well.

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All my homies use cc wild words

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Other than the font being just “ok”, the only think I would personally have changed from what you’ve done is, instead of using “We” use “I” and just add a * next to the first instance where “Watakushi“ with a note somewhere on the page describing the change in question. The “we” ruins the flow and general grammar structure and honestly confused me before I went to the comments and saw your explanation. I like that you did try and make the change work in English, but with pronoun changes either don’t say anything about it or add a little translator’s note off to the side.
Otherwise, while I can’t comment on the accuracy of the translation, I think you did a pretty good job making it legible (thank you) and clean.

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I've always wondered why princesses are so underrepresented in tsf compared to, say, maids or succubi. Between Disney, RPGs, and Isekai they're bloody everywhere, yet I can only think of two other works that really choose this particular theme (and stick with it).

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