Notes: The dialogue is moderately modified for it to flow better from scene to scene, but there should be no changes to story and minimal changes to character interactions and author's intent. In the original raws, the dialogue is very stop-and-go, which makes going from scene to scene kind of fragmented. I changed it so dialogue flows more naturally (to the extent of my writing capabilities). There are also certain lines re-written because it would sound very stiff in English. I also added an interlude on page 98. That interlude is not present in the original work, but is present in the summary of the work in various stores like Dlsite and Booth.
I'm sick in the head, blah blah. I love Akari Koubou Sensei's work, no one really captures orgasm torture dialed up to 15 like him. He has a bit of an issue with dialogue and overused time skips to an annoying degree, but his works are top-tier in this genre. There are still lots of his that I want to do, but they're hundreds of pages long... especially Enzai Majo......