While it could really use a proofreader, that's my only criticism. It's otherwise a nice comic. Predictable, but sometimes I like simplicity. The characters are simple but cute, the sex is good, it faked me out a little on page 21 from thinking he was already done, and...yeah, I like it. I just hope this is in progress and we get to see the rest of their fun, or at least skip to the morning after so I know it's done.