I'm still figuring things out, and I've finally found something that makes me happy. What started as an attempt to learn more about writing and practice my skills has grown into something more. I know my writing sucks because my fantasies have always relied on good ideas, not on transmitting them well to other people. I hope this time it's coherent enough... I can't really tell when I'm tired. I just notice the next day that I was kind of acting like Biden (I don't sniff kids or fall on stairs), I just don't make a whole lot of sense.

If anyone wants to proof read my works, I am down with it.

I really love this story and this work, especially the rules of the mind control, another chapter would be great!

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I love the idea and the balance of absolute slavery+freedom of thought. I hope she gets that friend she wanted

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This is really good. Looking forward for more!

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