In concept this could be interesting but the writing needs some work.

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Well... It could have been Emergence. I'm good with this.

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The art style is great! just wish the artist stacked with that first brunette girl and expanded in her with that brunette style, blonde turbo bimbos just don't hit as hard

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The end? Really?

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