Faptality!!!

Good story. Just the au translation is bad

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rerong rerong? what???

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@animal2909 rero rero or search google it means lick lick sfx you stupid or something?

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@broad hare They're confused because the shit translation has it as "rerong rerong" on page 41, which is wrong in like 3 different ways. If they'd have searched "rerong rerong", they'd have gotten nothing related to the original text. It isn't fucking even rero rero(レロレロ) in the raw, it's reron reron (レロンレロン).

Don't insult people because they don't know that a hilariously bad transliteration of a modified Japanese onomatopoeia should be read as "licky licky".

My review of the "translation" as a whole? it's fucking ass. Read the raw if you're able to.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3222812/8d7a25ea25/
Buy the raw: https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_518026/

Edit:
Mate, I'm here because it showed up in my watched list. I checked to see if it was an actual translation attempt rather than "I pointed an AI at it and it shat out some garbled words". I'd have simply rated it 0.5 stars and moved on, but you calling animal2909 stupid for them being amazed by an exceptionally poor translation really made me want to call you out for it.

AI translations with zero editing are an awful way of reading pretty much anything, and it really shows a ton of disrespect for both the author, the work, and the people you expect to read the translation. The translation is poor because the machine translator has no sense of context, there are words overlapping, some of the text is just the Japanese transliterated (and not common or loan words like onii-chan or sensei), text bubbles got partially destroyed or just fucking ignored by the typesetting...

Please, I know you want to help people out or share some porn you really like, but you'll get a much better reaction if you put some pride into your work. It doesn't even have to be that good of an edit, just being consistent with font face, font size, and not going out of the speech bubbles is good enough for beginner typesetting. If you don't know how, ask or search around for help. If you don't think you have the tools to do it, cell phones have become a lot more versatile in the past 20 years and maybe people can point you towards something that works for you. The translation side is much more difficult, but if you want to you can learn a language at any point in your life and you don't necessarily need to know a ton to actually check the output of a machine translation- spoken Japanese, which is 90% of the text in manga, is much simpler than written Japanese in most cases. There are new translators and editors appearing all the time and there's guides and people willing to help if you look around.

And finally, if this was a genuine effort, then I feel I should apologize. My words were overly harsh because they were backed by my indignation over your insults towards animal2909. If you want constructive feedback on a translation-in-progress, then you should ask for feedback somewhere (The forums have a place for this, the Cove of Scanlators!) rather than posting it as a finished work.

tl;dr:
If you don't want to put effort into your work and just "feel good and fap" then go ahead, but either keep your one-click translation to yourself or don't lash out when people call a spade a spade.

Last edited on 31 March 2025, 07:25.

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waos!!! :O

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@ZRQ fck that, why should I even care? I'm just fapping on the side. Do I need to use my brain to feel good???

Also, I'm kinda thinking of ticking the human translator part because of this so I can accept that shit. Why are you even here?

Edit: Also, I love it when people lash out at my translation because they give it a cent means they like my shit hahaha

Last edited on 31 March 2025, 10:26.

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