This work has the same gimmick as わんわん上司と (Woof Woof Boss, or however you'd translate it to), in which the perspective is split into two. In this case, left is Matsuda's (human) and right is Madarao's (beastman).
I took the liberty to edit them together, and if the content is the exact same, there will be only one of them. I'm not a fan of reading two works separately, but this also ruins the aesthetic of the work, for example page 8 where it's only available on the human's perspective, and may confuse readers on whose perspective it is.
My apologies if this format was uncomfortable to read as well...
Well this is adorable! I felt the format was fine.
Edit : Maybe if you could make the thought bubbles more obvious though? That way when someone is reading both sides they know exactly what they haven't already read? Just an idea.
I like the editing. It's an unique way of seeing both PoV at the same time. Next time you can consider change the text color/font/text bubble for each character. Great job on this.