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I have no idea what's going on, it's incoherent

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AI goes into MISC

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Yeah, I know what you mean, henta1lover0, but what do you expect from something that is written and drawn by A.I? I think if someone downloads this and does a bit of cleanup, it could be a half-decent comic. The art is ok and doesn't need any cleanup as far as I can see. but the story and writing need some changes, for example, Get the story straight: from what I can tell, the dragon goddess at the start summons this guy who is testing out a new game into a different world and gives him hentai system admin control by having sex with him and getting pregnant. Then she tells him to go out into the world and corrupt it to his liking. The other thing that needs to be changed is the grammar and spelling; like you said, it's so bad you have no idea what's going on.

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