This is my first try at translation, so mistakes or oversights will be possible.
I got tired of reading the Chinese version, so I tried my hand at translating it.

Though I can read the Chinese it was hard to fully articulate some of the wording. Some translation tools were used but I tried to change some of the wording enough to sound natural.

Also, I didn't exactly know how to make Daiyan say "雷蒙先生" work in English besides directly saying it as "Mr.Raymond". So I stole the Japanese way of saying it with adding "san".

Chinese？
这都汉化了什么，几个拟声词吗？

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tag打错了，这是汉译英，没有翻译拟声词，就跟我们平常看的没翻译拟声词的汉化一样（
Your tags should be in English Translated. not Chinese.

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已经有汉化了https://e-hentai.org/g/2777989/aa2254e2cf/

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这已经有汉化版了https://e-hentai.org/g/2884547/41efb94894/

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上传就跑？

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唉，没有留下上传账号的勇气

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画师未完稿被辣仙龟自己P的雷蒙，害画师退网，玩家联系画师把原版稿件重新完成加上色，啧啧啧https://e-hentai.org/g/3363154/1de8a57229/

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