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2 - Nope... Not even any aftercare. Just pump her and dump her. Something pretty AMAZING had better happen in the next 5 chapters to turn this guy around. Honestly, I can't think of a single instance when a character has been so ruined by his own origin story.

28 - "If you kept going, we probably would've had an o-"WOW! Look at the time. it's late."
Seriously, WIZ here is looking more boyfriendly than the ACTUAL boyfriend.

34 - So he'll let her sleep with him when she's drunk and he's in the company of two of his groupies, but when she has all of her agency and they're having what LOOKS like a romantic evening, he'll just plop her back in her room the second she falls asleep? Tobi's an asshole.

37 - I shouldn't be seeing more genuine concern for our heroine in ANOTHER ex-girlfriend than in our romantic lead. Look at her face as she's walking out. As upset as she is that her man is with someone else, it's too easy to read that expression as "Good luck, girl. With this one, you're gonna NEED it."

43 - "This guitar cost me 120 thousand kels. (1.2 million USD)"
Ugh... Just say the proper dollar amount... And for that matter, just say "God" instead of "gods"... This is clearly supposed to be a world that mirrors our own, so just say what WE would be saying. It's not world-building, it's just... weird and unnecessary.

44 - "Now, I'm a 'nice' guy..."
Yes, you've made that abundantly clear...

46-47 - You want to collaborate with her because you saw something pure and inspiring in her drunken singing? You could've OPENED with that instead of getting on her case about destroying a piece of music history, you DICK. And as protective as you are of your equipment, you really just STOOD there and let her do... whatever it is she did with it?

62 - No no no no, you can't have the background go all sparkly when Tobi meets Noms' friend. Sure, make HER background sparkly since she's clearly smitten, but is HE deeply in love with her too? Because he ain't SUPPOSED to be!

74 - ...This douchebag who effortlessly gets anything and anyONE that he wants... is threatened by Noms'.... TUTOR? Really?

98 - Dude, shut up... You dragged her through the misery of what you NEW was going to be an awkward dinner with your family, you can endure the awkwardness of receiving a gift that had more thought put into it that what you put into YOURS.

Base +6