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Hope you like it and if you don't then leave some feedback. If you don't like and don't leave a feedback remember ur mom gey

Is this part 1? Should probably have some kind of image to say that. Some of the eye positions are bad so might want to ensure they look good. And I would do each part as normal/new normal -> Therapist -> Hypnosis -> Changed personality. Not seeing actual changes in her is not great on the first part but ok. Enjoyed it so far tho!

Base +6, Captian Katsura -7, albertzeb -6

Looks like it's going to be good, but should probably get to the good stuff before releasing or you'll get lots of low reviews

Base +6, Captian Katsura -7, albertzeb -6, Corruptio Ultima +7, metaggros -6

Loved the induction.
I will watch your career with great interest.

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@Soob1234 thank you for your feedback. I will keep it in mind
@ajarlube yeah, they kinda nuked it, I will release the next chapter next week. Its going to be interesting. I can't wait to release the next one.
@jeckdex thank you for your kind words, it keeps me going

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Bit confused about the black pool and pink pool idea, I get the idea of what they represent but didn't it just kind of come out of nowhere?

Otherwise really detailed induction stuff which is rare and really good. Looking forward to more triggers

Base +6, Glovelove. +39, Czarblood +6

@2e1e3 I needed a buffer for the need without repeating the need over and over. It's funny how metaphors can be used, still mean the same thing, but be acceptable.

>Otherwise really detailed induction stuff which is rare and really good. Looking forward to more triggers
this shit motivates me a lot to keep on going. Thanks, hope you'll like the next chapter and I hope I don't fumble it.

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Base +5

second part was nice

building up that frustration until the appointment

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