Unofficially translated by me. It's my first time translating a doujin, so feedback is appreciated

You missed quite a few pages worth of text starting on page 14. I get not translating all of the SFX, but a good number of the speech bubbles are actually lines.

Page 14: "Na...nandakore suge" on the bottom
Page 15: "Kimochi ii" on the top left
Page 16: "Itadakimasu" on the top left
Page 18: "deru, dechau" and "dase, naka dase"
All of Page 22

The font also seems too basic and can be swapped to one of the common ones used in TLs, or more fanciful ones if you want to match the original text to a degree.

Overall, just pay a bit more attention on the final product before pushing it out.

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I am slightly dissapointed that there was no "And the two lovebirds got arrested or spotted by somebody because they got horny and screwed in public" joke that's common in many works by Kosuke Haruhito.

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Fetish for teeth unlocked??

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That's a recognized psychological disorder. She should see a doctor...

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dang imagine all that microplastics in her

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She fucking peeled a dick by biting the skin. That shit gotta hurt a lot.

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Finally biting that isn't outright vore! Bless you Haruhito

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Don't stick your dick in crazy, they say… what if crazy sticks your dick in them anyway?

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They should make a biting tag

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>you will never have a cute tomboy with a massive oral fixatation playfully nibbling on your dick during a blowjob

...Why must life be this cruel? Until 5 minutes ago I didn't even know I wanted this in my life.

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Fucking finally, biting focus without drawing blood. Today is a wonderful day. 10/10 despite censorship and some untranslated text.

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