Attempting to actually upload a properly finished translation.

Most pages here match those found in the English half of https://e-hentai.org/g/1355392/f3a76bdc3b/ except for two, because of the following errors in the linked gallery:
- Page 40 (gallery page 154) was the English version of the Japanese page 41 (the page immediately after).
- Page 41 (gallery page 155) was a duplicate of the Japanese page 41. (English page 40 was therefore missing.)
- Page 87 (gallery page 201) was similarly a duplicate of the Japanese page 87, with the English page missing.

The translations for the surrounding pages in the gallery matched those from https://e-hentai.org/g/978655/bca6e8383b/ (for page 40) and https://e-hentai.org/g/2615368/310e5fa980/ (for page 87), but the quality of the English pages in the galleries shown appears to be worse than for the corresponding Japanese pages (especially so for page 87).

I tried to remake the translated pages using the Japanese versions as a base. I am by no means an artist, so the drawing edits and hand-written parts weren't particularly easy (I don't have a drawing tablet). Still, hopefully they don't look too bad.

If you've opted to read all this, thank you. If not, that's okay too. In any case, I hope you have a nice day!

You really should go there and ask for the removal of the rough translation tag: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=254552
Since I assume you forgot to check the corresponding box.

Base +27, venfare +11, i8246i -6

glad someone is trying to fix/all in one a gallery and torrent of this series, is a very good series that deserves a proper translation and grouping,

Base +6, Techno1337 +6, JustAnotherWeirdo +7, cogbrown +6, venfare +11

I've always been a little confused if Arika was supposed to be a tiny girl Mana created or a normal sized girl Mana shrank. Like, it set up like Mana made Arika, but then there are lines that suggest she had a prior life at a normal size, like "I've gotten used to being tiny" or "wow, it's different than drawings"

Base +6, JustAnotherWeirdo +7, venfare +11, UnchieZ +6

I think Arika is supposed to be a normal girl who got reality-yoinked by Mana and shrunk on the way there.

Base +6, JustAnotherWeirdo +7, venfare +11

Yes, that's always how I read it, too. I would have enjoyed seeing that fleshed out a bit.

Base +6, JustAnotherWeirdo +7, venfare +11

Page order seems a bit scrambled around pages 24-27

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Thanks for the heads-up! Just updated the gallery to fix some newfound issues, page order included.

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