I read this story in various languages and noticed every translation has many differences.

So I checked the original and made a more accurate English version.

This is the final revision.

>but I managed to I hold back my feelings...
Dang it, how did I not notice that before??

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In other words you butchered the translation with google translate and decisively ensured that a proper translation will never be created? This is 2024. Anyone can run shit through image to image software and get a similarly butchered translation. Why do people do this???

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@TheGoodGiggle
How does this stop anyone? There was already another English version and that didn't stop me.

There are various duplicates of many other translated works too, each with its own flavor.

Last edited on 23 April 2025, 01:49.

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Well if it's old enough and there is no interest... this one is from 2021 and I don't think there are translators willing to go back and do this one sadly, MTL translation are more toxic if they are for recent works like before the doujin has two years in publication, most translators will see it translated on ehentai and think it's done than see it's a MTL one, this happened a few times.

It's a little disappointing but I get why you did this, just wish it was more clear it's MTL with the title and description.

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People hating on MTL (sometime for good reason specially when it's a butchered work with no effort) are kinda ridiculous.

"Just wait for a proper translation" buddy it's a multiples years old work (sometime 10-15+) with no good translation or low quality res.

It's just not gonna happen. Some of my favourite works are not translated and at this point, I would pay for a shitty MTL because I know I ts simply not gonna get translated.

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Already translated here
https://e-hentai.org/g/797994/1497ad384c/

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@zeros122
That was already mentioned, even by myself.

If it's somehow not clear, the point of this transltion is to be closer to the original source. Other versions radically change some of the script.

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