[Ryuukakusan Nodoame (Gokubuto Mayuge)] Tea Party (Mizugi) ni Sukebe Suru Omake Hon | A Lewd Bonus Book about Tea Party in Swimsuit (Blue Archive) [English] [HarmoniousTL] [Digital]
If you look closely, the text is all spiky and awkward to read. You should apply a rounding effect to the letters to avoid that. I don't know which program you're using, but it surely has the tool.
If you're going to be translating into English, you need to at least have a basic handle on English grammar and use of the language. At least get a fluent proofreader. This is hardly better than MTL