Why change college to high school? 大学 Noun 1. university; college 2. former imperial university of Japan 3. the Great Learning (one of the Four Books)
zero implication of high school at all
Might list more mistakes later
edit: Ok so let`s get to listing bit by bit
1. Page 2: 大学二年になった俺はルームシェアをはじめた This Translation: "I started sharing my room, when I entered the second year of high school" Basic Translation: "I started sharing a room when I became a second year at college"
2. Page 2: バイトや課題大学まで片道二時間は少々きびしかった This Translation: "Before it was difficult to divide my time between homework and school, which was far away" Basic Translation: "With my part-time job and homework (and other unlisted things), my long commute (2 hours each way) to college was difficult"
3. Page 2: じゃあ一緒に部屋借りよっか~ This Translation: "So... what do you think of renting a room near the school???" Basic Translation: "So let's rent a room together~"
4. Page 2: 僕も同じくらい時間かかってかったるいからさ This Translation: "I also live far away, so I get tired in class" Basic Translation: "I also take that long (to commute), it's tiresome/irritating"
5. Page 2: というわけで早速大学近くに部屋を借りたんだが This Translation: "We decided to rent a room near the school, almost immediately..." Basic Translation: "So we promptly rented a room near the college"
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6. Page 4: ...初めて庵の女装を見た時から思ってたが...アイツの女装はカワイすぎる...!! This Translation: "This has been happening since the first time he appeared dressed as a girl... how come... he looks so beautiful???" Basic Translation: "I've thought this since the first time I saw him crossdressing... he looks so cute in girls' clothes!"
7. Page 4: それに手を出したら俺はホ This Translation: "And if I do something I can..." Basic Translation: "And if I make a move on him, it would mean I'm... (gay)" Obs: ホモ(gay, homosexual) is implied here, with the verb up in the air, but "can" wouldn't fit
Fuck do I need a separate list for all the commas Small list with the comma mistakes: Page 2: "I started sharing my room, when I entered the second year of high school" misplaced comma
Page 2: "Before it was difficult to divide my time between homework and school, which was far away" missing comma between "before" and "it"
Page 3: "The main problem here is that, it seems that he's trying to seduce me..." misplaced comma
Page 3: "And I, I don't know, for how long, I'll be able to resist..." misplaced commas after "know" and "long".