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Just... why? I can't understand that a person will willingly took an injection for transforming into sex toy... and worst of all, it seem to be a law. If they were forced... ok. I would undersrznd the logic. But no. You are injected with nanobots and then it's your life, do what you want...
I don't know... maybe I think too much about it. It's just hentai.

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Yes, you overthink it.

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It seems to be based on two earlier works (more the first than the second)…

https://e-hentai.org/g/1092621/e5ca5311a4/
https://e-hentai.org/g/2012852/103c161d02/

It's just how things are in that world. In other words, hentai logic. Don't overthink it.

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(lapynheart ) I've never really thought about that before. Unfortunately, I'm not very good at writing stories. But I would like to create a manga soon that isn't hentai, but instead focuses more on the story and character development.

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@TFjohn748 You could try to listen to Brandon Sanderson's lectures about creative writing for Sci-Fi/Fantasy on his Youtube channel (he finished teaching his 2025 course recently, it is a good starting point; there is 2020 course released on his channel also), maybe you can get some useful info. I know, novel and manga writing are different mediums, but some similarities are definitely present: characters and their motivation, worldbuilding, pacing, story structure, promises/payoffs are all common key elements for most stories and points of struggle to all authors.

youtube.com/@BrandSanderson for clarity, if anyone interested.

Last edited on 14 May 2025, 18:15.

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I had no idea Brandon Sanderson did stuff like that. I love his books, especially Mistborn.

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Btw you can check Scriptnotes podcast, where screenwriters John August (Big Fish, Corpse Bride, Charlie's Angels) and Craig Mazin (Chernobyl, The Last of Us TV) discuss various topics about plot elements, story structure, filming etc. They often invite different guests from the industry: screenwriters, managers, designers, actors (Ryan Reynolds, Jesse Eisenberg for example).
Cool stuff if you're interested.

P.S. Yeah, you can find his lectures from earlier years, but on different channels (_some adjective that i don't remember_ Panda), probably from his working staff or some enthusiasts. Most of the information is the same, but every year has some flavor in it. Some business advices from early years are obsolete though.

Last edited on 14 May 2025, 22:28.

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It appears you already uploaded Chapter 1 as a separate gallery. You should instead stick to one gallery and update it as you add new chapters.

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