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(COMIC1☆3) [Upa Koya (Endori)] Riko-ane to Asobo [Let's Play With Sister Riko] (KissXSis) [English]

(COMIC1☆3) [うぱ小屋 (えんどり)] りこ姉とあそぼ♪ (キス×シス) [英訳]

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Posted:2011-02-11 03:20
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Language:English  TR
File Size:7.79 MiB
Length:22 pages
Favorited:17 times
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Average: 3.40
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Posted on 17 May 2011, 20:28 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +78
Uuuuh, Engrish, and crappy editing. This should've really went through proofreading, and we have editing tips at the forums... hoping for v2 :/

Also, this made me start a discussion in the forums on how NOT TO do editing/translating: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=34269

EDIT: proofread version is at https://e-hentai.org/g/365244/3b5d474de8/
Posted on 11 February 2011, 15:14 by:   MonMon19    PM
Score +9
ugh, your english vocabulary hurts my eye, no offense though...
why not consider taking some english class...

BTW if i won't see any V2 then i'm going to create my own V2 of this.
Posted on 11 February 2011, 21:37 by:   NoNameNoBlame    PM
Score +83
I have that problem too &ndash; my body just doesn't sexy enough.
Posted on 01 March 2011, 09:50 by:   ZeroBlazer    PM
Score +51
Wow, I love this translation as a joke. It made me Lol so hard.
Posted on 28 April 2011, 15:26 by:   gooper50    PM
Score +2
The English hurts my head. Its as if it was copy/pasted into Google Translate. As stated before, a little bit of proof reading goes a long way.

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