hello, Degamishiro here
thanks for read and purchase this doujin ^^

“Bleak sonata” will have physical release
for now there’s no direct sequel planned,
but there’s some spin-off of existing
characters
stay tune!

lastly,
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https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/130443883

patreon:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/bleak-sonata-128105738

Indonesian artist? Sukses buat physical release-nya bang! Art dan panelingnya oke banget.

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@bigbro000

iya, bakal rilis di Comifuro XX minggu depan ^^
makasih masukannya! :D

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wah karya lokal, sukses terus bos, penasaran sih kenapa share disini, padahal yang lain paling anti kalo karyanya udah muncul disini...

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There you go: A NTR story where the girl doesn't fall for the NTR cock, the boyfriend saves her (?) and the NTRman is sent to prison... and it's not that great despite having so many pages.
I'm sorry but it just doesn't click at all and it's mainly due to the characters. The story is your token blackmail NTR eromanga plot so I'm not going to complain that much about it.

For starters the characters aren't that well developed so we really have no reason to care about them that much specially the male lead who is shown to be just winging it from start to finish, he is just the nice dude hero but with a backbone because he decides to beat the shit out of NTRman at the end. There's always a soft spot for characters with balls in this kind of genre but that's about it for him.
Now the female heroine... she's just your average NTR pushover love interest and she's a pretty idiot. I mean there's virtually no reason at all to believe the NTRman! She ignores the warnings of her friends, she decides it's fine to whore herself as part of the deal and despite all this shit she continues doing it when the fatfuck is not even honoring the deal like come on dude! I think this girl is just dumb as a brick!

Friends literally don't do jack despite knowing that she is whoring herself it's only after she is getting fucked that they do... something I guess? They just go and tell MC and he has to do every thing which it's kinda funny. I suppose should they have called the cops, at the beginning. we wouldn't have any story.
NTRman is just your generic evil fatman, he is just as dumb as the main heroine because he came up with the most retarded of ideas to fuck her and it worked (Okay maybe he is smarter than her). There's nothing much to say about him apparently he sells drugs and owns shady business... we never see. Anyways he gets his ass kicked and he sort of won at the end of the story.

Overall the story is just too generic, the fact that we are not even shown that the NTRman has an actual leverage on the heroine it just makes you feel everybody is missing common sense in this world and deflates every thing that happens.
Some random complains: The bikini sex scene should have been longer and wearing the bikini until the end! Clothed sex is the best bro. // Some panels are rough and yes I know they are not important to the story overrall but the art is consistent until one of those panels pops up. I have no complains about the art other than that one // If you wish to share your work in english please use a translator or hire someone because english this rough is hard to read.

By the way I suppose it's called "bleak sonata" as in despite having a happy end she was impregnated by the NTRman almost at the end right? I wonder if the male lead is also going to be okay with that... now that's a fallout I would like to read if there's a sequel.

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@einzel42

makasih ^^
sekedar promosi aja sebenernya
soalnya platform sosmed kurang gede engagement sama algoritma nya

@ Yukipo~

thanks for the feedback ^^
totally appreciated that!

and yeah, i did found some error and inconsistency while make it
especially kinda rush for the deadline around late april
definitely need more quality check as well as read proof

i hope it getting better in the future!

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Did she abort the kid?

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@Yukipo~
In conclusion: it's not NTR at all, but just a bog standard rape story.

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