Great job, but man this one was really lewd and no one pay it any attention

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It's always funny seeing the internal dialogue "I am the one in control" as her fucking throat is clogged with dick. Whatever you say

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Reverse raping succubus works is always god tier content.

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Hello, I'm the translator of this work. I mostly used manga translator tools for this, so some panels couldn't be translated at all(like the spiked panels). But all the normal ones were, of which I corrected myself using context clues and basic grammar. I have close to no knowledge of Japanese, but I really wanted to see this work translated, so I did it myself using the tools at my hand. Despite the many flaws it has, I hope you still enjoy it!(also i removed the censor bars as well).

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You should use better softwares than that if you really wanna use ML, if you want i can link in MP. BTW part 2 of this is about to come out

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By all means link it! My comment wasn't received so well, and I do wanna mention that I'm completely new to this stuff. When part 2 comes out I want to translate it as well, because I really like this artist's work, but I want to be better equipped to deliver a better product. Just so you all know, I just want to translate the artist's work, because it hasn't been translated yet. I can only hope that with my translation someone catches an eye of this series and translates it better.

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Are you seriously happy with this slop? Good lord. Let's look at page 2, where it starts:
> "thanks to that, they're easy to manipulate"
... thanks to what? If we look at the previous panel for context, it would be because of "it's thin and tasteless"... but I'm pretty sure that a man having thin and tasteless semen does not make them easy to manipulate. Obviously, you've left something out and this is like the third panel with text on it!! I can't be bothered to check the raw to see just what you fucked up. You didn't put any effort into this, why should I put any effort into calling your garbage out?

And let's look at the next two panels that remain on the page:
> "because the memories of men who are attacked are processed as dreams by the succubus"
> "it's existence remains only a rumor"
... English motherfucker. Do you speak it? I can pretty much guess what these panels actually want to say, but you couldn't even be bothered to fix the MTL up. And you posted this? And expected praise?

Thanks for nothing. Go ahead and "translate" the next one too, but do us all a huge favor and keep it to yourself.

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Hey man, honestly, I do understand your criticism. I actually looked over the translation and saw that I put the mtl images in page 2-4 and page 42-43 instead of the ones I manually translated. I also did forget to remove some censor bars. If you think my translation is bad, that is completely fair, you are entitled to your opinion. As I said though, I only wanted to translate this, because no one had done it before, and I only hope that people can see this work and improve it with their translation. I do plan on improving my translations (and remaking this one, because, as you mentioned, it is very poorly made) and also want people to share the required tools to help the process. I do think that it's only a win-win scenario, and I do promise that If I publish something it won't be as rushed as this one.

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Thanks for the translations. I enjoyed reading the story.

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@karaqis MP sent

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@dafdagh @dragoon93041 Thanks!

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