raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3358529/e102515e67/
part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/3368833/7a9d8e8c07/

I'm also taking comissions
scdnhtru@gmail.com if interested or if you want to support me

@crusnic198: I don't have a proofreader, if you have suggestions, go ahead
@dafdagh: Very likely not

You should have someone proofread next time. There's a bunch of little things that could have been shortened or are worded weirdly, but it's pretty good.

Base +5, Narane +9

cant see if you replied to it, but will you remake part 1 with the new raw?

Base +6