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[Tirotata] Adabana -Epilogue- [English] [ShitTL] [Digital]

[ちろたた] 徒花 -エピローグ- [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2025-05-27 06:18
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Language:English  TR
File Size:6.21 MiB
Length:11 pages
Favorited:253 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.52

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Posted on 27 May 2025, 07:02 by:   ChronicLogic    PM
Score +7
I'm confused about the ending with evil spirit.
Posted on 27 May 2025, 07:44 by:   BigNuts123    PM
Score +45
@ChronicLogic I think that's just to show that the girl who gave janitor the possession power was also possessed herself? Although we know it since in ch. 5 she has a fox's shadow.
Posted on 27 May 2025, 13:30 by:   SakurahimeInori    PM
Score +7
Thanks for finishing this series. Really appreciate it!
Posted on 27 May 2025, 14:17 by:   UnlimitedBlades    PM
Score -2
10/10 art as usual. Though I'm not sure if the story makes much sense to me haha. The issue is that it combines merger with revenge. I can understand the janitor guy wanting revenge, and it follows how that would fit in with the possession. The question then is the follow up. Was ruining the Ayanokoji family, specifically the father, worth losing the family's connections and money etc to become an AV actress? It would have made more sense to just manipulate and use the family after completely absorbing Aya's soul imo. The janitor guy can still be a slut on the side since he loves doing that stuff.
Posted on 27 May 2025, 15:20 by:   trufadenetwork    PM
Score -2
Great art, decent story.
Posted on 27 May 2025, 16:02 by:   BigNuts123    PM
Score +6
@UnlimitedBlades yeah would've loved it if he got the dad arrested after fucking him or sth. Would've made more sense and also been very dark. As it stands the art is amazing but the story is like a 6.5/10
Posted on 28 May 2025, 13:34 by:   chalunkxlight    PM
Score +18
Well, i have a mixed feeling about his revenge. While i understand his reason for revenge, but the process along the way makes me sick. I'd be fine with it if he focus only on the family, but instead he has to invlove those who has nothing to do with his miserable state into this. Such as the boy who he intentionally break his mental just to break Yuika's. Not to mention that he shifted all the blame to Yuika when it's his choice to do so.

And with the epilogue, it feels ironic when he claimed that Yuika took everything from him only to see that his daugther who he cares the most still greatly care about him. Makes me feel that the claim become exaggerated just to satisfy his desire for revenge.

Personally, i'd prefer he left Yuika alone after his revenge is completed. I think it'd be a good life lesson for her elitism attitude. I mean after all he has done with her body, no one's gonna believe what she said even if she got her body back anyway.
Posted on 28 May 2025, 16:22 by:   mysterykcad    PM
Score -5
Y'know, maybe translating the epilogue before the rest of the story wasn't the best idea...
Posted on 29 May 2025, 02:05 by:   SakurahimeInori    PM
Score +7
The rest of the story has been translated, just got taken down from here. There are places to find it online or @BigNuts123 could give us a link
Posted on 02 June 2025, 06:07 by:   BigNuts123    PM
Score +6
hentainexus has official translations for all the other parts so you don't have to suffer my TL.

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