you've messed up the text placement in a bunch of bubbles, and the bubble cleaning is sloppy

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sloppy, aint no one reading text sideways dude

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@Neko237 Belive it or not the sideways text is how it was presented in the translation, I literally just copy and pasted it, onto a blank bubble.
As for the sloppy bubbles well, as I said I did this for free more so I could read it myself than anything else, if it bothers you that much you're welcome to not read this version. I made it public so that others could enjoy it if they so choose. This was the first time I tried doing something like this so it was very much a learning process, that said, at some point I do plan to go clean up the first few chapters where I made some pretty blatant mistakes, and wasn't yet really doing it in an efficient way. I spent about a week doing this, and while it's still nothing compared to the time and actual work that went into actually drawing the Tank, or Translating it (again massive props to Komori Translations). I did what I set out to do, which is have a de-censored version of the tank in English, as every translated version on the web right now is mostly white out censored.

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J18 released it as Sexual Healing, very good but Nude Beach was better

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Any chance of a torrent please?

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@Iva-Bigtool Maybe after I've cleaned up some of the more obvious mistakes in the first few chapters. It took me about a week to put this all together so I'm taking a little break from it before I go back and do some cleanup. My intention was to make this available to as many people as possible, so making a torrent sometime down the line isn't a bad idea, just if I did I'd want it to be the "final version"

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At first I'm like wait, why is he using a condom. surely he's administering the medicated semen directly inside her.. then oh, it has to be oral. well, whatever- oh he's doing her bareback anyway. okay! But then later, it CAN be administered bareback? am I overthinking a hentai? it seems like they put a lot of thought into this.

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Credit pages should be at the end, not the first page

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feels so extremely awkward that he is made to make out with the girls right there in the classroom with the guys still there and everything??

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Thank you for your efforts, as a proof reader I know how much time it takes.

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