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"this nigga is trash"
I don't think Kaguya would say that

Rest of the translation seems fine at a glance though. I like the artist so I'm happy to see any translations for their works.

Base +6, Juanit0_Joseph -2, Rose Garden +10, sgc_geh -12, kageganon -6, Adnotum7 -9

The hell is the point in putting a racial slur in something like this?

Base +6, Letto Lettosa +6, Juanit0_Joseph -2, Rose Garden +10, sgc_geh -12, Paizurikin +10, PornHubWasTaken +6, Crian +6, Sylphon -7, randomname12131412 +7, Hallation +9, Adnotum7 -9, RubyRoy +6, and 2 more...

this feels like a joke translation somebody forgot to put jokes into

Base +6, Juanit0_Joseph -2, Rose Garden +10, sgc_geh +12, Paizurikin +10, PhobosMP4 +6, Slateboard +6, Crian +6, 151132 +8, kamisking +6, kageganon +6, k_2553472 +6, Job John +6, and 6 more...

Could definitely do without all the ebonics and neologisms.

Base +6, Lorde Doome +6, sgc_geh +12, PhobosMP4 +6, Crian +6, kageganon +6, k_2553472 +6, pockets44 +6, Hallation +9, HircumPrinceps +6, AN4Lisateur +6

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/903435/30aa2e194e/

Base +8

An underappreciated artist like Ogata Hiro deserves better than whatever this is.

Base +6, Paizurikin +10, deidara10 +8, kageganon +6, k_2553472 +6, randomname12131412 +7, Hallation +9, HircumPrinceps +6