fantastic, go on

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Awesome :3 !

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This was good. In future it could be improved by better page layout and alignment. Pages 1, 9, 12, 15, and 20 would be better split into two pages and laid out horizontally.

Degenerate, the layout change is good.

As for the rest, there's a few AI haters here. They can fuck off.

Last edited on 31 May 2025, 15:01.

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This was really good! Can't wait for next chapter. Bu, as @cgh said, a few pages were almost unreadable, It would be best to split them into multiple pages.

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Tried to make it more readable

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Next: https://e-hentai.org/g/3378359/a0d564dae2/

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