Thank you Machaku

Base +7, Machaku +6

Green nipples/areola?

Base +6

Well, she's an child of one of Gods of Death. The green is just an side effect of her magic

Base +27

first chapter was good and now is all over the place, so many male characters and back stories for no reason. stick to a single story and that og male mc until its finished, then expand with something new or side stories.
yes it require more time for writing a coherent story that can be later expanded but at least it doesnt feel like a salad where the author just put everything to appeal to everyone

Base +6, Ben Dover +9

All the more reason to not fear the reaper.

Base +6

Well that was great.

Base +9

So the reaper basically doomed from the beginning, there is no shot she can compete with the girl that took X in. I am bit sad since I quite like the reaper , but the story is nice I still gonna read this from time to time.

Last edited on 08 June 2025, 11:28.

Base +7

I was hoping he keep atleast the cop as personal slave to order around.

Base +10, Syerathe +15