Heya everyone, I'm a beginner JP learner and this is my first attempt at a translation with the help of online translators.

I know these types of machine translations aren't looked on favorably, but I gave it an honest effort at double checking every line and cross referencing it with dictionaries to the best of my abilities. No AI has been used.

I hope this quality is acceptable to the community and to the original artist who'se art I really liked to make this!

(PS: I translated all the SFX until the end where I double checked and noticed this does not actually seem to be a common practice, sorry if it turned out cluttered because of it!"

>MTL

Kill yourself.

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Honestly, if you were diligent about checking your work and cross-referencing dictionaries and didn't use AI, I hesitate to call this an MTL effort. It looks decent enough - some of the dialogue is a little hard to follow but that's not exactly your fault. Typefacing is okay, and there's only one spot where you clearly exceeded the text box.

Overall I'd call it a pretty respectable effort. Definitely doesn't deserve to be lumped in with AI MTL horseshit.

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Appreciate it, I still called it MTL for safety because I don't know at what point one would consider it MTL, or if any online translator assistance at all makes it MTL.
Obviously some people don't like it lol, but I'll try to do better in the future.

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