My first upload and comic :)
I was over years just an enjoyer here because im very bad at hand drawing or using programs like photo shop etc.
The possibility to make your imaginations with the help of AI to some nice ART, wakened my interest and now i finnished after generating around 8000 Pictures with Comfyui my first comic.
To the reason that here are not so many Demongirl/Succubus TF/TG comics i created this
Yes the comics from AlwaysOlder and other artists inspired me to try it.
Warning: Im not a native english speaker, yes i proof readed it but im sure my gramatic is not the yellow from the egg :P

If you want to see more of my art go to my deviantart page on: https://www.deviantart.com/doenerteer

Oh and some honest feedback would be cool, what could i do better, whats nice, whats not nice etc, maybe you have some ideas what i should try next.

The best advice I can give you is to take some creative writing courses from some where, it'll help you immensely. Much more so than practicing on stuff like this in your own little bubble and reinforcing bad habits.

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@W1slicer thanks for your advice i know i have some problems in my native language what creative writing depends, so to translate it in english took some time, thats my first work and many many space to improve it <3
My thought was just publish it and see what happens.

Edit: I think its a good idea to make the textes in my native language at first and translate them, i think that would be better :)

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First piece of advice I have is that generally it helps with immersion if characters make reasonable decisions, like in this case having the basic survival instinct not to ingest an unknown substance like that. Who the hell sees an uknown liquid appearing out of nowhere and decides to just drink it? I could think of several pink liquids off the top of my head you absolutely should not ingest under any circumstances, and that aren't particularly hard to get either.
I've used pink corrosive cleaning products, pink antifreeze, hell even Diesel fuel for specific applications has red coloring added, which can appear pink under bright light.
And just to be clear this does not only apply to pink liquids. No reasonable person should ever ingest any unknown liquids, regardless of color.

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@Blublab123 thanks for your feedback, i know my problem with creative writing i should have described the Pink Liquid with some tasty strawberry smell that seduces the protagonist to drink it.
its my first ever made comic, so much potential to improve :) with writing, prompting for Comfyui for better pictures etc.

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I would say if possible to add expression to your character, he always makes the same frozen face and does not look at what is happening to him. From my point of view, I find it not interesting. In addition, the character remains for no reason against a wall, he could be surprised by the effects or scared, he could rush into the bathroom to watch himself change into a woman or if you want to put him against a wall you make sure that he is hot, he presses his wet back against the wall, his clothes gradually get soaked with sweat, so he takes them off, he seeks the coolness of the wall to refresh himself.

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@fr05 thanks for your feedback, its definitly possible but the problem is comfyui for me, to much prompt could drasticly change the consistence of your Charakters
And i coudlnt use with the AMD GPU Zluda version of Comfyui some workflows like StoryDiffusion etc. maybe i will find something that will make it easier for me.
So i must adjust the prompts very carefully.

Next time i will took more time to make the images with fitting impressions, emotes, rooms etc.
For this comic i needed around 10 hours... most time got into prompting and writing the textes, to generate one 832x1266 picture took around 20 seconds.

As I said before in the other posts i have very much to learn.
Edit: Oh and to write a script of my ideas should also help me to make it better, for this comic i just wrote it mentally in my brain...

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Honestly the quality of your generation is trash. Like, Literally garbage. And I'm not even talking about Style, which I do not like at all. I'm talking about countless artifacts that you didnt even bother to fix. I dont know, use faces detaler or smth. And better model if you can afford it in vram.

Even my AI arts are much better, and I'm shit with it. I think that you should be ashamed to post something on this level for People to see. Git good bro

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cool :D !

It's nice to see other's trying this awesome hobby <3

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Not bad for a first attempt. Still have a lot to work on though. Some examples of inconsistencies:

Bottle is not consistent and drastically changes from page to page.
Same with MC's shirt logo.
Pages 5-9 blanket/sheets on need keep swapping colors from page to page.
Pages 11-13 - MC goes from clearly wearing shoes, to shoes on the floor, then back to wearing them across the 3 pages.
Page 10, doorknob isn't even on a door. It's just sitting on a wall.
Pages 8 and 13, doorknob is on the same side of the door as the hinges.
Posters keep changing, page 13 has the most glaring example. Poster goes from being of a tree to being a cop.

There's others, but you get the idea.

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@Horadriel @XxHybridFreakxX Thanks for your feedback

I was fully aware that it is not perfect, I thought just try it and your nice feedback really gives me more courage ;)
And i saw AI Art that got 1 or less stars, so im happy with the two :)

The problem is the model i use it is difficult to create consistent bottles, but solution should be Inpaiting for this, havent tested it yet, saw some videos seems not to difficult.
Yes i need finer prompt tuning to avoid different pictures on clothes.
To the Background/Environment its very difficult to keep this consistent like the character, i mean main Focus are on the Characters, but yes its a little bit stupid that the Door etc. changes in every picture.
i checked other AI generated comics, they have the same problem.
Easiest Solution would be a neutral background in white or another color, but thats a little bit boring.

A big mistake i made was i rushed through it to finish the comic.
Next time i will use more time and some days, the best ideas you get while not working on it xD

Another solution for the artefacts is i use a higher resolution, the comic above was generated in 832x1216 now i use 1024x1512 take more time for generating but the result is definitly better :)
For example i made a small transformation morph in 4 pictures from Emils Female form to her Succubus form:

https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/90a423e3-1b34-45cc-800b-4a8ba9b35246/djxqr1c-810e8bbd-c87b-405d-be20-9b3150b79eed.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzkwYTQyM2UzLTFiMzQtNDVjYy04MDBiLTRhOGJhOWIzNTI0NlwvZGp4cXIxYy04MTBlOGJiZC1jODdiLTQwNWQtYmUyMC05YjMxNTBiNzllZWQuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.RCQ5Rg5N_UQTJo2isEuRVUrJjrSrdVXqfsdVhMyZwsM

I will continue this comic :)

@triin thanks for your feedback i know i rushed trough it and the result is not so perfect, its my first comic, so im unexperienced, i use AI Image Generation since 5 weeks also much to learn :)

Can you show us some of your Art?

Edit: Loool my comic got also shared on that typical comic sites with slow download speed xD

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Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/3399668/8b9f2e7ee8/

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its neat but if i grew wings i would try to fly

ps nike about to sue somebody exept that time they turned into addidas ooh and converse

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