Part two is finally here my luvs! <3

--Millie uses a magical disguise to impersonate Moxxie to get the truth straight from Loona's mouth. In this second part of the comic "A night with Loona" Moxxie, Loona, and Millie will learn what they really want for their future.--

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hmmmm this is getting quite interesting!

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Plot twist, she's going to like it lol

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Holy shit, I wasn't expecting more of this pure win after how great the first one was, let alone so soon. And it even starts with that adorable-as-fuck hellhound girl Sol, it's setting itself up for things to get even more tangled than in the first story, and...I can't wait.

Last edited on 08 October 2023, 19:41.

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if this was the actual show Moxxie and Millie's rolls would be swap

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And here we go again, I was afraid it would take years!
Well after that it will still take years XD but it's still good.

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So glad to see this sequel developing and getting off the ground. As much as I loved the sex, the story bits also intrigued me. Rather interested to see how Millie will take her husband's affair while also absorbing any feelings that Loona reveals.

Still curious to what our mysterious and stalkerish pupper with the glasses is up to in terms of an endgame.

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masterpieces！！！

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@Willie29 If this was the actual show, Moxxie would have been called fat five times and emasculated seven times. With the amount of times that moxxie has been put in girly clothes, Vizzie might as well be saying that he's not masculine enough to be a man.

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We're so back

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Whats the bet that, through some contrivence, that Loona will be able to tell its Millie before those tiny shorts of hers are by her knees, then she uses that to Blackmail BOTH M&M or perhaps its Sol doing such a thing.

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I mean Millie x Loona is 100% welcome too...

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Anyone know how to deal with the (Parse Error Retry) screen?

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this keeps getting better and better...

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Heh... Yeah... "What could go wrong?" is the question, that should NEVER be asked.

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@Sovann Bubsy: "what could possibly go wrong?"
Everything, man.. everthing.

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Once this gets going, I’m going to appreciate the good story setup beforehand, but for now I’m like “get on with it!”

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I love how cute they look on page 11

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My prediction, 13 pages in:

Loona is not going to fall for the disguise, her hellhound sense of smell can tell that Millie is Millie.

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So does the “illusionary” erection meet Millie is getting turned on?

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Jizoku is getting lazy with the head rounding. I get it's their style, but the first page of the original comic was true to the show.

Last edited on 11 February 2024, 06:19.

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@defcon5
Moxxie himself has his normal head shape in the couple pages you see him, rounded-head Moxxie is Millie in disguise. Presumably the disguise is imperfect, as this detail is carried over from Millie's figure, not to mention her reflection just showing her normal self. Guessing the cover was made after Jizoku thought to add this detail, or maybe he didn't want to spoil it, dunno. But the head shape definitely seems intentional.

Wonder if Millie's trying to repress her accent, she might let herself slip through that or her dialect.

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@fireman66
Very sharp observation... I never noticed that. Is that you, jiz?

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And now Millie is gona have sex with Luna which would make her a complete hypocrite against Moxie if she held their previous night against him.

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@Defcon5 @Fireman66
It’s clear that the “Moxxie” body is intentionally not made to be 1:1 of the real Moxxie for the sake of OUR view from the outside since we have the knowledge that this is really Millie, while in universe they just see plain ol’ Moxxie. If Jizoku just wanted a perfect Moxxie disguise he could’ve just done that again, but of course he has a whole comic for that.

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I'm going to call it now and this is my theory. Luna can smell the difference between the two of them. That's my theory and now we'll have to wait until probably the end of the year or until next year to see if it's true.

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Darn. I just got off of the last wild ride.

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@picadorman

Hah! That's the thing! The ride never ends!

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Oh okay, we're dispensing with the pointless drama and going straight for the threesome. I'm down.

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"I can't stop"🤣

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On that day, Millie learned empathy for her cheating husband, and the joys of hellhound pussy.

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Is it still cheating if you turn into him and cheat on him with the girl he is cheating on you with?

We must go deeper...

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Heh heh.... I have a nice feeling, that it will end up with Moxxie having TWO wives, and Blitz possibly having a heart attack.

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The disguise spell will get rubbed off at some point before the blindfold comes off. Millie wont realize until Loona reacts to her.

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God bless my penis

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So Loona know all this time?

Then again, it's hell, you think the monogamous system shouldn't even enforced in the first place- episodically when everyone talk about fucking every 60 seconds.

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Welp, should’ve put on Moxxie’s uniform as well. Canine’s nose isn’t a decoration after all.

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@Wehrmacht_Wichser
Only from about page 18. She looks slightly embarrased compared to before (but that could just be because of the porno playing). It's also there you see her actually start to take the initiative.

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Definitely didn’t expect her to find out this early, but if it means Loona gets to have more insane sex, I’m not complaining

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I hope Loona also has sex with Millie without the disguise afterwards

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And the threesome is basically confirmed now

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Hope to see a threesome happen in the next comic or soon with two Moxxie's, maybe with Moxxie and Millie without a disguise so we can see some hot lesbian action while Moxxie watches or somehow Millie is finally able to take Moxxie's dick and Loona watches Millie enjoy what she experinced while masturbating to them before joining in.

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high quality,but why is Moxxie bro

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Page 27: GREAT TIMING, MORON!

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SOOO GOOOD... :)

Pg.27- Well, FUCK! What's that 'Peanut Head' doing here?!

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Fuck off back to your gay owl drama Blitzo.

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Ooh, I didn't know that Jizoku made a sequel! Loving it! >.<

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we need a hero to bring us Chinese type

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You know, I think Millie has just accidentally stumbled upon the solution to the original problem that started this in the first place.

Moxxie said he was pent up because his dick was too big for Millie.

But now Millie knows that Loona is capable of handling it.

So use that same magic potion shit to turn into Loona and then Moxxie can finally fuck her.

I think we just found the plot for part three.

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Sol is way too damn cute.

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I really hope we get just millie and loona but I don't know I don't think we're gonna get it I hope I'm wrong

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Oh look, the comic is behind from the public release version. I wonder if this means we'll get a thousand more copies that'll only still appear on the alternate backend that, for some stupid reason, we can't spell out in any capacity as if that backend is fucking Voldemort. Ugh...

Last edited on 26 September 2024, 04:22.

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Oh YEAH! Hot, passionate threesome (maybe even foursome) comming right up! Well, hopefully at least...

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ERASE THAT SEAL! Man I love all the looks Millie keeps giving Loona.

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I kind of hope this is the final story for this series, let it end where it does but let it end exactly how long it it needs on the note you want without dragging this on into seasonal rot.

Last edited on 12 October 2024, 01:01.

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So, here's the thing, someone online had gifted me a physical copy of Night with Loona. Why am I mentioning this? Well, it just so happens that i'm wanting to use it to obtain something else that maybe someone on here can help me with. I Jizoku's warm tier patreon exclusive stuff, specifically the editable CSP files for NWL1! For translation stuff. So if you got the the first 3rd of the comic like this, let me know and we can work out an exchange for this completely free book. :D

Last edited on 23 October 2024, 18:24.

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This is gonna be one hot foursome soon

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Loona flipping the script on Millie and taking control is much hotter than I thought it would be. The framing and expressions in the central panel on page 38 are amazing.

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having now become a certified wolf pussy enjoyer he's already having thoughts about Sol

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I know it’s unlikely, but I want Sol to get some loving too.

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Okay, with this new page, I'm hoping for a HOT and wholesome FOURSOME. Yeah!

And... Moxxie later having (possibly) THREE wives!!! Becouse why the heck not?

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God fucking damnit, i didnt come here to develop a healthy, non-horny appreciation for a raincoat wearing puppy... but look at me now! my boner is totally ruined and im still coming back next time for more Sol. What am i going to tell my fellow perverts?

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Let's hope Sol also has her moment.

Page 45: Wait, wasn't a meeting room with Blitz watching TV at the other side of that door?

Last edited on 08 December 2024, 15:50.

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Page 48
I don’t want to hurt you, Sol.

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sol is fucking cute

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40 Slaps, aw shit! How can you be kind after 40 slaps???

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Man I really hope that those two don't stop when or if moxxie and sol open that door or when/if the door is opened when everything settles down that Loona and Millie go back at it while the other two just watch or just have moxxie watch and Loona and Millie invite sol to have fun I just would like a threesome with just the girls having fun and moxxie watch for a bit and then he can jump in and it finally be a foursome

Last edited on 30 December 2024, 07:44.

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omg，这个真出同人了

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page 49: Oh shit. Whats it gonna be folks? Either drama or loona geta herself an imp harem. Personally,i vote for the harem.

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Loona gets an Imp harem I hope

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oh, I think Millie is interested in seeing that xD

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Sol doujin when?

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Sol just spilled the beans.

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Drive doesn’t really matter at this point, they’ve both been fucking loona

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I think it's a little bit too late for Millie to get angry about Moxxie banging Loona.

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notice millie forgot moxie even existed until the pendrive was mentioned what fresh hell

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So! For anyone reading this, if you were someone following Jizoku since the early days and got CLIP files for Night With Loona, please PM me. I've been trying to obtain them for the longest to such no avail. I can offer a sizable credit bounty or cold hard cash in exchange for what I'm looking for.

Bounty for anyone that can help!
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=25201

Last edited on 27 March 2025, 06:16.

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Millie being a hypocrite because she was enjoying what Loona was doing while disguised as Moxxie and Loona knew it was Millie, plus Millie never stopped Loona until now, I still hope Loona gets an Imp harem

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Ooohhh.... horny cavity search! Heck YEAH!

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Pg. 57
SOL’S CHEEKS!

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Let's hope we can see Sol in action too.

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I don't think Jizoku likes Millie.

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Milie is a hipocrite in this one

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I hope Millie says "You didn't invite me" also is Moxxie gonnna get a foursome/harem with the three girls or before that will the girls have some hot lesbian action first before Moxxie joins after seeing a hot display when walking in?

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You just fuck that girl in both ways
WTF R U MAD ABOUT

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Well, atleast we got SwainArt and Hermot Moth to show us the more positive outcome with this theme.

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Heh. Millie cheated, yet somehow she's still angry at Moxie...hypocrisy at its finest lol

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I've lost interest in the 2 fighting
need more Sol

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Boy, that escalated quickly, like, that really got out of hand fast!

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had promise, but between the weird out of character hypocrisy and the awkardly shoehorned in OC i think this one just doesnt hold up

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god dammit jizoku is going to add tall moxxie (a stripper from their pin ups) into all of this

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Okay, this is some powerful writing.

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Come on, just become a trouple and move on xD

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@Lord_neah YES then all will be forgiven after some fantastic sex with all three or four if her friend is included in Loona's harem

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I just want an imp spitroast on Loona, praying to Lord Jizoku with all my might

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@blackheart327 Yeah I feel less invested with every page of this that comes out. The first comic? Amazing. This one? Not so much. The characters aren't believable anymore. I definitely lost interest after Millie started fucking Loona also, but still kept being a fucking baby about it. Now it's just NTR drama, but it doesn't even make sense from any perspective.

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So we're putting the "out of character" behavior on Millie for being heartbroken and vengeful for being cheated on (irrational, apparently), but not on Moxxie for even having it in him to cheat on his wife in the first place?

Like, I know we all got our thinking-caps on while we JO to a comic based on a show most of us haven't watched past the first few episodes, so surely we can recognize that Millie lezing out with Loona instead of immediately going "AH-HA!" is a convenience for the porn comic (not even taking into account she's canonically straight).

If the comic is only now waning on you, it's probably because you wanted a more contrived porn-plot over what this is, which is at least a more realistic reaction than Millie going, "Now let's have a 3-way!"

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On my knees hoping and praying this artist hires an actual competent writer for any future comics. The art is great, but I'm becoming less and less invested with every page.

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It’s over.

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We fell into the boat of true relationship drama, what will they do!?

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well.. would ypu check for your MM email????. i sent a bit amount of credit with a long letter as Hentai MM mail.

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I'm gonna go ahead and guess Millie is now gonna fuck blitz now that he's in the picture.

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I gotta say I liked part 1 better. Just casual moxxie and loona was better overall. Just more of that would have been great.

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@Superasil
Yea, I hear you. The buildup to the bedroom was really nice, and I was hoping for something action’y like the first one, but the main action was quite lackluster in comparison. I’m not gonna say Jizoku is running low on ideas, but i think he should do something entirely different and not attempt to do a NWL3 or else risk the feeling of milking it now that all secrets are open now. :(

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this comic is mean

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Bam, normally I would say an orgy is the correct answer to solve everything... but now it seems like they are truly up shits creek without a paddle

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The way I see it Moxxie and Millie are even now. Not only did they both cheat on the other, but with the same person too.

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Millie: "This marriage is over!"

Also Millie: "Let's just ignore the fact that I did the exact same thing you did so that I can be mad at you and pretend you're the only one in the wrong here."

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>Get him off!

Is the artist not a native english speaker?

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"This marriage is over!"
"Because we're going down to the courthouse to get a new one, with Loona in with us as a three-way!"

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It's honestly incredible how absurdly forced this conflict is. Is the author even aware of what they're doing or do they genuinely beleive Moxxie's the only one in the wrong? It honestly feels like an AI wrote this and keeps forgetting its own plot.

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haha moxxie you are fucking my daughter

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@yuki665
Just because Millie mostly blames Moxxie doesn't mean the author shares that opinion. That kind of hypocrisy is also very common with cheaters IRL.

That said, the writing has a few other issues. None of the characters come away particularly likeable and it feels like the story is making light of a rather abusive situation. I'm kinda worried that any resolution to the conflict will feel quite forced.

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I'm really hoping this is a bait and switch and they are all gonna have an orgy. Really really hoping. Can we at least get Loona and Sol?

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