Made english version of Terasu’s fma work, from the September 2023 Fanbox update.
With the fixed page order

https://terasumc.fanbox.cc/posts/6761823

Another of the author's old works that requires attention

https://e-hentai.org/g/1509243/2262dfcacc/
https://e-hentai.org/g/2883185/3473a69124/

Base +8, grlt +3, kachiporra +7, psyburn21 +20

Art 8/10 Plot 1/10

Base +6, Korynga_San +6, Bronxden +7, cheekyjtx +5, baadar +7, psyburn21 -20, phantomruler -6, Sofa King -6, sikdy -14, ZKYz +6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, HikiDono +6, Natewolfblade +6, and 1 more...

Character assassination

Base +6, Zeratul656 -7, Bronxden +7, henta1lover0 +6, shenanigans1337 +9, baadar +7, Holovox +9, malyg -6, psyburn21 -20, phantomruler -6, falafelswoop +6, player4578 +6, pantonious +6, and 12 more...

Definitely the best of Winry in Terasu style! Thanks for sharing.

Base +18, psyburn21 +20, player4578 -6, Sofa King +6, Malkovik +6, MelmothTheWanderer +38, heroofjustice +8

i know Terasu MC treats NTR as his bread and butter, but distorting a character's personality like that kinda ruins it. Art Style is still pretty sick though.

Base +9, Zeratul656 -7, malyg -6, psyburn21 -20, phantomruler -6, falafelswoop +6, dimanganime +11, pantonious +6, Sofa King -6, sikdy -14, ZKYz +6, Extendor +6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, and 7 more...

Agree with others here, this is so stretched it feels like why even have it be Winry and Ed? Why not make it some OC in Resembool has a crush on Winry, Ed returns after saving the world, fucks Winry, cucks the OC. Also giving up his alchemy turns out to have been a slight overpayment, so the Truth gave him an enormous cock.

Base +9, Zeratul656 -7, malyg -6, psyburn21 -20, phantomruler -6, falafelswoop +6, dimanganime +11, player4578 +6, RamboPicos -3, Sofa King -6, sikdy -14, Malkovik +6, Extendor +6, and 8 more...