This is the end of chap4!
But fret not, a spin off with Max is being released!
https://e-hentai.org/g/3351470/b61c657472/

This was the last chapter using those techs, the next chapter should have a nice bump in image quality and consistency (and a slighlty different style).

Also there will be more lewds:
In the end chap 4 is a transitional chapter, the 5th will be the climax of chap 4 (they were supposed to be the same chapter, but I had to cram too much stuff into one chapter so instead there will be two)

缝了不少inax老师的作品

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I'd love to see more, first time experiments turning into more would be a sexy but cute story.

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Really good, please keep going

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一看就是inax喂出来的

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Im impressed, this looks very much like inax artstyle and im loving it

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要怎麼看是inax的作品呀？

How do you know it's inax style?

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This was AI generated ? Gosh darn, it's so good !
Feels like this technology is getting better by the day ! Please, do continue !

If I had to criticize, I'd say the typography could use a little work.
Also, Jack doesn't have his set of "eyebrow horns" on every panel.

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Thanks for the kind words grosbatard.
I appreciate this kind of constructive criticism!
I think the eyebrow horns should not appear in the future as I removed them on most recent pages,
for the typo should I go for something more cartoony/handwriten ?

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@nonimous
You're welcome :3
The Courier New font doesn't bother me at all, in fact I quite like it (it's a personal thing, really). Tho, maybe Tom could use a more "cartoony" font ? Idk, it's really only up to you.
No, what's drawing attention is :
1/ The font keeps changing. I've noticed that Tom talks in a font, and Jack in another. Which is fine, but sometimes this is simply not the case and they'll use the same font ; and then different fonts again. So if this was a deliberate choice if feels a bit "all over the place"...
2/ The inconsistency in whether or not characters use speech bubbles (phylacteries ?) at all. Sometimes they do, sometimes they don't and it's just ... there. I'm not sure there is a pattern to it, or maybe that's just how it was in the older pages (?). Like, Dormitory caretaker clearly doesn't, and at first I thought that was their thing, but no, other character do it to...

Now, please, do keep in mind that those are minor gripes and I wouldn't bother myself with such things unless I was aiming to broadly distribute my work.
I'm sure you'll find whatever fits best the style you're aiming for ;)
I very much want to see where this is going !!

PS:
I showed it to a friend and he said "That kobold has external testicles Immersion ruined" xD

Last edited on 08 October 2024, 14:00.

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@nonimous

thank you

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@grosbatard
1/ Each character should have their own font, it's an oversight from me if it's not the case ^^'
After the chapter 2 I'll try to find a font that suits Tom better (maybe something more "slender")
2/ Yea I see, I tryed a bunch of solutions to see what is the best and I think that I'll stick with outlined text

here is a realistic version of Jack, I hope your friend will like it =P
https://e6ai.net/posts/67724?q=nonimousmate

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@nonimous
1/ Oh, ok. Well then, if I may : p18 (fonts are inverted), p27 (Jack, bottom of the page) and p30 (Tom's name and last image) are the "oversights" I remember off the top of my head.
Cool :)
2/ It's your comic, whatever feels right is good.

Haha, thank you good sir. Will let him know x)
I'm hyped to see where this is going ;)

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ai? huh... looks good

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Alright this is the end of the second chapter!

Please do tell me what I should improve on, what you liked and what you'd like to see in the future

(also can one of the people who downvoted the comments explain the reason to me?
I'd like to understand, maybe I can convince you that I'm not doing anything despicable(?) or maybe you'll convince me...)

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This is the first time I've seen a ai gen actually become a good comic, excellent job.

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What to do to improve the next chapter? Simple. After nearly 50 pages of build-up, it's time for kittyboi to hump his kobold pal.

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I sure do hope they'll eventually get to "do the deed" ^w^ (aka. hot steamy anal sex !!!)
#nohomo, dude !

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@nonimous

Don't react on any score in this site. Basically if someone hate furry he will score you down. Same with AI stuff. Even moderators can give u 1start score before your gallery is even visible for people.
You doing good.

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@nonimous Hope you continue the story a bit with these characters. Can't wait to see what you do next

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I absolutely love this, fantastic

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isnt this just inax

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I want more sex and anal，and close-up of cum coming out of the asshole after sex.🤓🙏

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A new chapter! Let's goooo!

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我一看那个鸡巴就知道是谁的图了

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@nonimous I think pg 25 needs to go behind pg 34, judging by filenames.

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Awesome, we need more.

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im getting Nagatoro Vibes from Lizard Lad

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@Mr. Xecret nice catch! It's because I changed the position of this page (I like the insight it gives for the third chapter)

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This is probably the best AI comic I’ve seen. The characters are great too.

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This is some actually good stuff!

You've taken a very interesting route with using AI art to make a comic rather than disjointed rando pics, and it deserves praise and commendation. Honestly imo this is the route that should be taken for quality content.

Please keep at it, would love to see more and again - this is some GOOD stuff!

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.
. Why am I so invested in this?
.

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@MorphoTron
Because this is a damn good AI comic with cute and likeable characters. It’s truly a gem.

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I usually use negative tag search to remove ai from my feed, but man am I glad I didn't do it today, really love how the story is going - genuinely forgot it was ai while reading it, thanks for the chapters man

just realized this but our lust boy was never not hard indeed haha

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@nonimous Wow this is so good. What a gem! What AI software did you use?

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@Anon23-_- For this I've been using ComfyUI with the PonyV6XL model to make each panel then edited everything together and added dialogs myself.

Next chapter I'll be using an Illustrious based model (and some loras for the characters to increase consistency).
You should see a nice upgrade in quality and hopefully consistency, the style will change a bit though.

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@nonimous Thank you! I can’t wait for the new chapters!

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This is very well put together, great use of ai

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This was amazing, some of the best AI art/story i've seen, and i loved this kind of gay content. Felt very natural, and enjoyable. Really, really want to see more of this type of stuff (especially the mutual masturbation style things)

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