The cosplay is not bad, but it seems to me that there is more vulgarity and intimacy here than the cosplay itself. It would be possible to take more ordinary photos and take 2 or 3 photos with some eroticism and nudes. Well, or gradually add eroticism, and not immediately expose yourself. But in principle, cosplay is not terrible, but it's not cool either. :)

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