Hello, I have uploaded a previous translation that was of lesser quality and now I made a better translation. I feel that this is a much better product than the last one, which I would honestly like to remove entirely, and I can only hope you enjoy this translation!

Well, you uploaded horrible slop before and you've actually put in effort to improve. I'll be honest, that's pretty rare, so I must commend you for that. I'm not going to comment on the translation accuracy (I'll leave that to smarter people, though topleft of page 25 is most likely wrong), but I only have minor complaints now (page 5 slab of text is touching the border for no reason, page 7 "seduction" really should've been on the same line instead of being split to two lines, etc. stuff that doesn't particularly matter).

Since this gallery is tagged as rough translation, you didn't tick the checkbox for "this was translated by a human" when uploading. Was that a mistake? Or is this still MTL/AI just cleaned up?

As for the previous gallery, you could have updated it. That doesn't remove it from the site entirely - but it does hide it unless people specifically go look for it in the "parent" gallery. But well, too late now. Now your best bet might be to disown the old one. If people look at the comments it'll still be obvious that it is your old "work" but.

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I mean, I want to remove it from the site entirely, as it is very low quality. If i can do that by disowning it, then sure, but if i can't, I'll just report it and hope it gets removed. I did put a mild amount of effort in that one, but I do admit it was slop. When I remade it, I looked into how I could improve my translations. I did use AI, but tweaked it on my own to make the dialogue feel more human and make more sense in the context of the image. I do think I was off on some parts, but I'm mostly satisfied with my work. I don't have a lot of time to do this, hence why it took me 2 months this time, so I couldn't make this my top priority of to-do things, but I still really wanted to make a decent translation out of principle (also I really like this work).

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For future reference.
My uploads>Manage>Create New Version
Let's you replace an old gallery instead of needing to create a separate one.

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Nothing short of a DMCA takedown request from the rightsholder of the the doujin/tankoubon/mag/etc can remove a gallery that's otherwise not against the rules from the site. Even if you follow ozuuma123's instructions and update the old gallery, you can still see the old one.

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it seems to have been removed.

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It is still searchable with the "Browse Expunged Galleries" toggle and anyone with the link can still see it.

https://e-hentai.org/?f_search=uploader%3Akaraqis&advsearch=1&f_sh=on
https://e-hentai.org/g/3366601/2d67c782ac/

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Some spelling errors I found

Page 5: somehing -> something
volumptous -> voluptuous

Page 7: suboridnate -> subordinate
definetely -> definitely

Page 37: sumbit -> submit

Page 42: violet -> violent

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i kinda hate it when a succubus loses in sex. Aside from virgin Succubus, Aren't they generally suppose to be at the pinnacle of sex? why does marjority of succubus end up enjoying it so much they summit to the male afterwards?

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This is great! Love the image of her peeking through the window,super funny!

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Page 44, empty speech bubble.

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Spelling error on page 2:

intro dreams -> into* dreams

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