When I was about 7-8 ish I was half asleep and peed in the kitchen garbage can while my parents were at the table. Their laughter woke me up.

Base +14, 空氣拌飯 +20, AlexUnknown +10, Doze2 +6, SonicBlu +6, m42a +18

no idea why it's so downvoted this time, the translation isn't so rough for once. Unless there's something I missed.

Base +6, AlexUnknown +10, ginbrz +4

The translation's not awful, but it's also not good. For example, there are basic errors, like using 'he' instead of 'she'.

However, I think the bigger issue is that the story is just kind-of meh. It's over a bit too quickly and nothing really happens.

Base +7