Hello everyone!

This is my very first time translating a comic, and I’m excited to share it with you! This is Part 1 of 3 of this wonderful work. I hope you enjoy it, and I really appreciate any feedback you can give me. English isn’t my first language, so I’m always looking to improve. I’ve also removed all the small Japanese symbols—let me know if you think they should be kept in future releases.

If I’m not following any e-hentai rules, please feel free to let me know. I’m still learning!

About My Process:
I plan to release one new translation each week on my Patreon.(https://www.patreon.com/uploaderScanTranslation)
Each week, I’ll also post a part for free here, so everyone can enjoy!

If there’s a specific manga you’d like to see translated, you can suggest it on my Patreon—I’m always open to requests!

Links:

Raw on e-hentai: https://e-hentai.org/g/3444920/81a8e16caa/

DLsite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01425989.html

Artist on Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/132776584

Support my work on Patreon for full access and to help me keep translating:
https://www.patreon.com/uploaderScanTranslation

Disclaimer: I am not the owner of this work. If you are the original creator and would like me to remove or adjust this release, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

is the patreon taken down or does the link just not work? I've tried link and a manual search

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Just with a quick glance (only looked at a few pages so far and haven't checked for translation accuracy), it seems fine. Font choice is a little weird, though. I'd suggest something like "Wild Words" for dialogue (that's what I use, anyway) and something like CCMarian Churchland for thought boxes and bubbles. I feel these fonts look better. And having several thoughts to differentiate different parts (speech, thoughts, and moans) tends to look better.

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@wombatty
The Patreon is still under review, as I just created it. Apparently, it takes about 3 to 6 days to be approved.
In the meantime, I’m working on translations—I’ve already completed 5 so far!

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Please don't upload half chapters like this, it's pretty scummy. You can advertise your patreon if you want but clogging the queue with incomplete galleries degrades the usefulness of this site.

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@ast14
Ok I will change that

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@uploader The translation and stuff look OK-ish (you made a mistake on page two where the "main character" text should be "same person". See here: https://jisho.org/word/%E5%90%8C%E4%B8%80%E4%BA%BA%E7%89%A9 . I personally cannot tell you to not put up a Patreon or anything, but I would recommend honing your craft more before asking for money for it. I almost thought it was AI at first because of the font choice, but the typesetting was too good to actually be AI. The cleanup and stuff generally seem pretty good, but I would try to think about how the text flows within a bubble. And I would recommend trying to keep the text within the bubble via text sizing and formatting. It takes a longer time and requires trial and error; however, the results are much better. You can look on my profile to see some of the translations I've done. I can't say I am the best ever at it, but I do take great pride in my typesetting. I will say that this will likely decrease your output (from personal experience), but it will have the benefit of possibly getting more patrons through a more aesthetically pleasing product. Don't take this too much to heart. I know how much time it takes to do all this. I hope you will see it as a path toward improvement!

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I look forward to the rest of this being translated.

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