Hey, everyone! Sorry for the long delay, but Symbiotic Companion 6 is now complete and ready for your viewing pleasure! This is in celebration of reaching 6000 followers on Pixiv and is in continuation of Genny's journey with her alien-symbiotic: Symbie!
Where we last left off, Genny was enjoying her life and her friends. Then one day, a mysterious woman named Nadia appeared, carrying her own symbiote, which was the fractured half of Symbie. She was less than friendly with Genny, and she proclaims her goal of taking over the world. Realising her threat, Genny and her friends took up the mantle to stop her. The next day, Genny and Felicity went and investigated a mysterious pod before being attacked by symbiote-infected hosts created by Nadia. Meanwhile, Jane was left alone at Genny's house until she was visited by Nadia herself! What will happen to Jane? Well, read to find out.
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I'm sorry, but the Director's Cut message (p609) is pretty stupid. You sound like someone who's afraid of being cut off from their paycheck. You're doing corruption porn. It's about magical things that rape both mind and body, consume them, and convert them to their own. What about when the alien-tentacles rape, is that not a problem? What is the problem here? You cannot possibly skirt this issue. That is the genre)
EDIT: Imma edit most of my comment out, because I felt like I was needlessly being a dick about this, if anyone even gives a shit. TLDR: If your editor meant that the character goes: "No! Shit! Stop! This sucks! Stop that! I hate everything about this and you!" is unattractive and offputting, if not at least distracting? Yeah, sure, I agree. Usually in these type of works, you want the character to go: "No! Shit! Stop!" but internally go: "why am I liking this?" So the "edited result" at the end there, it's an extreme over-correction. You don't need them to vocally go: "Ah yes this is awesome!" -- she IS being defiled here, it makes sense that she'd resist outwardly, but internally "be into it". That's kind of how you can have your cake, and eat it too, in these sort of scenarios.
So, just to be clear, I think I get what your editor was saying, but you made an extreme over-correction at the end there. Having her smile with laughs and giggles is also pretty weird.
@Solipsist My editor was particularly triggered by this. They wanted none of Jane liking the sex/rape scenes, and were very adamant about it. It also doesn't help that Nadia is their least favourite character. I wanted to play nice and not to offend anybody further, but I will give some pushback in the future