The intercourse scenes are good here, shows intensity, grabbing her face, etc.

I don't understand some of the dialog here, Ako is asking for forgiveness because she realized she was about to get fucked. Then she's asking Hasumi to forgive her by giving her pussy a "death sentence"??

@S-One Yeah, that could be right.

@Aleafer That makes more sense, thanks.

@Temporaling thanks for correcting it!

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@AriesWarlock I think Ako was hoping that by saying that, it would satisfy Hasumi by giving her some mental jerkoff material, not realizing she was inviting destruction.

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But then Hasumi's "Not a chance" wouldn't make sense. You're right to question that line, as it's simply a mistranslation.
The Japanese had つよつよちんぽでおまんこ死刑にするのだけはゆるしてくだしゃ… which is translated as "Please, ANYTHING BUT giving my pussy the death sentence (...)", but the key word, 許す, got translated as its other, perhaps slightly more common meaning, "to forgive" rather than "to exempt". Common beginner mistake. It's a shame, especially since the typesetting is pretty good here.

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need a sequel with her breeding fem!Sensei

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Updated page 18. Thanks to @Aleafer for helping with the mistranslation!

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this artist wasted many pages on nothing happening at all, and overall is confusing. lost a chance to make a good one maybe next time.

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