Artist: https://niginigirabbit.fanbox.cc/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/3193371/a5fe8f275a/
Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/2611298/fef7673cde/

Note:
Page 5: The "smoke" part isn't mistranslation. It's "煙" in RAW. It's a bit confusing since that panel shows the elf's pendant/gear. So, turns out it's a (Spoiler) Curse from the gear, even though I can't find any smoke emitted from it.
Page 16: In RAW version, the bottom panel has 2 speech bubbles. These 2 looks like they're coming from the elf, but they don't. The dialogues should be spoken by the old dud. So I remove the pointer(?) from the bubbles.