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(C103) [grand-slum (Cure Slum)] Kinyoku Sister ni Zange o Suwareru Hon | Forced to Confess by a Virtuous Sister (Blue Archive) [English] [Vincente090]

(C103) [grand-slum (キュアスラム)] 禁欲シスターに懺悔を吸われる本 (ブルーアーカイブ) [英訳]

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Posted:2025-08-04 13:07
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:241.8 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:624 times
Rating:
120
Average: 4.16

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Posted on 04 August 2025, 13:07 by:   Vn lover213    PM
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Please support the author. and despite the number of uploads I'm still a beginner at these kind of things. Can you guys help me with tips or my mistakes on tysetting or anything related. (except the font style I'm using mobile)
Posted on 04 August 2025, 16:35 by:   Ancient-Alien    PM
Score +21
Empty speech bubble on page 16 top right.
Posted on 05 August 2025, 09:57 by:   watdis    PM
Score +6
I suggest gaining a stronger proficiency in English.

There are so many grammatical errors that addressing them individually will not solve the underlying issue.
Posted on 05 August 2025, 16:33 by:   nalor    PM
Score -38
Completely missed a whole speech bubble and the translation, grammar, and word choice is poor. But notice you're sitting at a 4.1 rating because it's clearly done by an incompetent human and the coomers on here have a localizer fetish so they'll still rate this highly but if they found out a flawless translation had one panel done by AI they'd instantly go full reddit and start screeching about there not being a fat illiterate shirtless brown man involved in their jerkoff session.

Tips: You suck at this and even a raw MTL would be better, it would just get a lower star rating because coombrained zoomzooms heard an asspained influencer/voice actor/artist say AI bad because their clop commissions have started falling off. Just MTL it and fix any glaringly obvious grammatical flaws, the people on here will go from publicly pissing and shitting themselves over "MTLslop" if there's a mismatched pronoun, to instead praising your hard work and dedication, and the only thing you needed to fix was a single word in a single speech bubble on a single page and then upload it under a different account. Ask me how I know.

Cope mald seethe but everything in this post is true and you know it. Total localizer unemployment.
Posted on 05 August 2025, 22:13 by:   TheKidAgain    PM
Score +15
you know you're making a great argument when you end with "cope mald seethe" like it's 2010.

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