Hmmm... The story isn't finished? Well, hopefully we'll see the full version of this work at some point.
Little note concerning the translation: At several points, the main character kept saying "Sister-in-law" while addressing the woman. Found it a bit strange to translate like that. I kept the "Nii-san" (p1) but this was because pretty much everyone know what it means... but I couldn't really do the same thing with Sister-in-law. Hence I either removed it whenever I found it unnecessary or used her name (Makie) instead.
@Tyciol *In-law to be more precise. Both men are brothers, and the woman is married to one of them (and the other man, the one getting sucked, calls her "Sis'-in-law" several times).