It has some good story bones in there. I think if BTDrake takes a little extra time studying on anatomy of genitalia and overall body angles. They will have a better future in porn comics.
Heck, I dig the no-dialouge approach of the comic. Yet possibly having some text bubbles of symbols or better body language would be better in the future.
Not the worst thing ever, yet deserves some polishing in order for this rough gem to be discovered.