Replacing https://e-hentai.org/g/3486059/ec4da44cf8/ due to being out-of-order and that REALLY BOTHERS ME.

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I'm pretty sure it's still out of order lmao

Base +6, Akiron +7, S-One +6, jason12052011 +7

I think that's the artist's poor storyboarding at work. I'd love to see the raw.

Base +6, S-One +6, jason12052011 +7, Orronen +6

It's a little tough to follow, but page 8 seems like it should actually be page 10 at the very least. It's also possible that the current pages 11 and 12 should be flipped, but I could see poor blocking explain the confusion there as well.

Base +6

I don't think 8 should be moved to 10 on the basis that Kauma starts messing around with her finger at the bottom of page 8, which naturally flows into the first panel of 9. Similarly, I don't think 11 and 12 should switch because you can see Kauma consistently hoverhanding Matari's dick during that sequence (her hand is still down on current 12), and Matari yelling about being unable to stop coming on current 12 flows naturally into her fainting on current 13.
Kauma also swaps hands she's groping Matari with (left on current 7, right starting from current 11), and it's her left hand she uses as an hypnotic focus during current 8-10, suggesting that she raised her left hand and then moved to Matari's right side (where she's seen on current 11).

I do actually agree that page 8 seems out of place, but I really couldn't find a more logical place to.put it, especially with the instant_loss setup of the preceding page. My main issue is that Matari's dick gets cleaned up between current 8 and 9, whereas after current 10 she's drawn with the oozing soft ejaculation consistently until she has a hard one on current 12. However, I think the most reasonable explanation for this is actually poor storyboarding, especially since the 2-page instant_loss thing is uncommon for Jimador and may have been added later into the editing process.

Base +6

Has anybody bought the original to compare so the right order is indeed right?

Base +7

Presumably whoever got "Gullin" to translate it has the raws, but they didn't feel like posting them.

Base +6

Well this one was pretty depressing.

Base +9

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/3497804/bbd5c05380/

Base +17, as102 +15, HeavHo +15

since the raw was posted we can see that pages 12 and 13 are flipped.

Base +7

God. Dammit. I'll fix I shortly.

I got very distracted by my university work so JPMaximum beat me to it, so this now has an expunge request so that we don't have two out-of-order galleries shitting up the place. I'd appreciate it if anyone who comes by would join the petition (since I can't just delete the gallery).

Last edited on 19 October 2025, 01:48.

Base +6, John Silker +7