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[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Asettarashi [Digital]

[シュート・ザ・ムーン (フエタキシ)] あせったらし [DL版]

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Posted:2025-08-17 18:23
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Language:Japanese  
File Size:374.9 MiB
Length:56 pages
Favorited:1452 times
Rating:
173
Average: 4.54

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Posted on 17 August 2025, 18:23 by:   5153    PM
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Posted on 17 August 2025, 19:15 by:   -Hiiro-    PM
Score +80
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[Synopsis]

Saori is a volleyball fanatic who lives for volleyball.
She vows to rebuild the prestigious volleyball club but she is forced to satisfy the sexual needs of the scumbag former Japan national team coach, Nakagaki.
However, he praises her, throwing her off her game and before she knows it, she is seduced ... and in the end, she is the one who... (͠≖ ͜ʖ͠≖)
Posted on 17 August 2025, 21:03 by:   Orion9137    PM
Score +50
Now time to see if Fuetakishi can wrap this one up in a satisfying way, or if he'll milk it for years until nobody cares.

@Zeratul656
I mean it's just simple pattern recognition pal. I love the dudes art and I liked his old series. You know, the ones that he actually ended in a reasonable fashion? Or at all. His golden age is unfortunately long since over.
Last edited on 18 August 2025, 07:38.
Posted on 17 August 2025, 22:47 by:   Zeratul656    PM
Score -30
@Orion9137 He just released the first chapter, there are clearly other 2 girls to go through and you're already writing this shit
I know hating Fuetakishi for the sisters series has been easy upvotes for years but this blind hate is getting annoying at this point
Posted on 17 August 2025, 23:09 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +91
@Zeratul656
Just that?
The elf series never got finished, author just dropped it and that's worse than the sisters ntr series.
Posted on 18 August 2025, 08:24 by:   jawman    PM
Score +21
This is just me being an ntr-hater who still look at the art for a wank.

The story could have been fine without the ntr part IMHO.
You can remove the BF of Saori in the story and just have a reason for the coach to be a scumbag like something happened in his team in the past which lead to him being what he is today.
Saori then knows the coach through sports tv/news and inspired her to play volleyball and just was surprised that he stopped playing and now finds him as their coach and was half assing it.
Then Saori pester the guy and the guy then gives her a condition, he trains them properly in exchange he sucks him off but he only did it just to keep Saori out of his ass, but then Saori does it anyways.
Saori then proceeds to do what he ask as long as he trains them properly and ultimately it lead to sex the one who called instead of Saori's BF is her team mate asking her stuff and the guy tells her that she is turned on after hearing her friends voice and the thought of being caught having sex with her coach/trainer, then after sex the part where the guy was sucking on Saori's breast she ask what happened to him and the guy just looks at her in surprise and Saori didn't intend to say that out loud and stood up and left telling the guy to make sure he comes early for practice or something.

Based on the artist works preview in fanza there should be 3+ chapters of this i think, and have 3 women specifically the 3 girls on page 4(or 3 if you dont count the front page).
Well gotta wait just hope this doesn't infuriate readers as much as the one from the sisters manga.

@Wilfriback
So he really did drop the elf one huh? The other story as well with the successor guy not sure if that one was completed, it has some ntr aspect but the men there who liked the girls first doesnt mind the girl being taken by MC since they owe the MC's family and the MC wasn't really a complete asshole iirc. and i think he had to make an heir or something to continue the bloodline or someshit.

Regarding the sisters doujin personally i hated it, but it was i guess ok somewhat compared to other NTR doujins i read, since the cuck was their brother, i just didn't like how the "friend" had to rub it in the brother's face knowing his parents just recently died. I think that's the thing that angered most of the readers the most. The little brother lost not just his parents but also his siblings who started disregarding him and then those older sister became sluts who spread their legs and have unprotected sex with just anyone after the "friend" went to pursue baseball iirc and left them alone to whore themselves out, it feels like the author/artist was down hard to fucking with the little brother, and then the artist added a new chapter with a few pages with the little brother fucking some woman who i think he NTRd and was going to get revenge or something but artist didn't pursue further because he was already negative shit thrown at him at the time for the story ending, so it just ended with that cliff hanger with the brother turning into another NTR man and the artist just started making new content unrelated to the other works.

Also i think the apartment doujin seems unfinished as well, not really sure wha'ts happening to the author/artist, if he can't complete/finish his works i think he should just focus on single chapter doujins instead of multi parts..... well actually i know what's happening its natural aging, its catching up to him and all of us, i remember reading his works while i was still at school and now i'm a grown as adult complaining about NTR stories that anger me in the internet, when in the past i didn't care i just fapped and go do some other stuff.
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Posted on 18 August 2025, 15:21 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +27
New series with 2 girl upcoming and probably harem.

Nice.

And seriously, the boyfriend are just placeholder for this to be called NTR genre, his exist didn't make any different much at all to the story.
Last edited on 19 August 2025, 01:19.
Posted on 12 September 2025, 13:33 by:   Owenism23    PM
Score +7
等一手汉化。目前看来可能是质量最好的一本了

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